Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_O Eh...
The plot was not that bad. Everyone had their places and their characters. *groans* oh... me head hurts. Too much Physics in one day.
I've noticed a few misused and misspelled words in your chapters. But they weren't that big.
Yup! An original fic!! VERY original and full of sci-fi things. *groan* my eyes hurt. Too much thingies about those strange terms. I've got to study Physics in English next time. o_O
I've really enjoyed it, though to be honest I can't put the 10. Sorry. I put the 9 because most of the chapters are hard to see through... o_O maybe I'm not looking hard enough. UGh... I'll study all that sci-fi next school year, so I might understand this story much much better and give you the 10 instead when I'll review again. Okay?
Overall it was quite exciting, interesting, highly described in o_O ooh... too much of those stuff again *me head hurts* I wonder where you got all those ideas. I couldn't write one better myself. This was a very highly written fic, I presume. Those who're quite familiar with Physics in English should know *something* about this. Too bad I don't know a lot of Physics in English ^_^'
PLEASE continue!! Don't be taken back by some of my comments. Please write/post more!! I'm anxious to see what's going to happen next.
=^-^=cin |
