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Reviewed By: kaila-chan On: January 29, 2003 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder how you felt when you wrote this... I can say that I never say a PWP story soooooo good like that. Continue to write more... And you could do sequel, don't you think? :P And BTW, the whip thing is absolutly cool ! I never thought about that... :) My night will be fill with good dream I think :)
Continue your excellent work!
Kaila-Chan |
Reviewed By: jessica On: January 29, 2003 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the lemon keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was such an honor to beta read this ^^ I loved it!!
I've never read such a long lemon b4, and it didn't get tiring. ALot of long lemons just repeat and repeat itself but this ^^ It just kept on leaping up with new surprises and new lemon ideas that I've never read of b4!! ^^
Great job ^^ |
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