| "Sexual Abuse" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Laina On: June 27, 2003 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS FANTASIC!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: charity On: February 01, 2003 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you have some of the best lemons I have ever read and trust me I've read ALOT! ~_^ also some of the KINKIEST shit I have ever read again that would be alot so keep up the good woork can't wait for more of your lemons and fics' ~_^ |
Reviewed By: charity On: February 01, 2003 12:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you have some of the best lemons I have ever read and trust me I've read ALOT! ~_^ also some of the KINKIEST shit I have ever read again that would be alot so keep up the good woork can't wait for more of your lemons and fics' ~_^ |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 05:36 EST
Comment/Review:
The good: very creative, great whip use - especially since, from the description, it seemed to be a bullwhip, and that you can't really use on (normal) people.
The ... not so good: Dude, nobody has that many orgasms in a row without stopping to recharge! It would benefi the scene, I think, to do more teasing - end with one really big satisfying orgasm instead of each person cumming at the drop of a hat.
And a little nitpick, I don't know about you, but my breasts don't exactly swell. :coughs:
Anyhow, it WAS good, I don't want you to get discouraged at all - if it was just plain bad I wouldn't have bothered to tell you what I didn't like! I just think it could use some work. Of course, with a PWP, whaddya want... ;) |
Reviewed By: cherrynat52 On: January 30, 2003 17:45 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was great you should consider doing a sequel and its such a great lemon. I think its like nothing I read b4. Great job!!! |
Reviewed By: VegetasGirl9 On: January 30, 2003 15:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I know I'll be having good dreams tonight right after a long cold shower. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 05:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly perfect! Very hot and extremely well-written. You have a real knack for the erotic. Great stuff! :) |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 23:15 EST
Comment/Review:
Woohoo! I love gratuitous sex! That was great and that song was perfect for it. Man I wanted to do something like that, just so deliciously kinky, a few months ago but I couldn't find the right song. But I don't think mine would have been quite this caliber anyway. Great job! Keep putting out these awesome lemons! Looks like I'm taking a cold shower before bed hehe. |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 09:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*still shaking with undiguised lust* Damn that actually had the power to get me hot as hell...I'm thinking of buying ME a pleasure bag to torture my husband with...man you outdo yourself each and every time with the B/V lemons...each one's nastier and sexier than the last!! Fantastic job!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 20:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.
*runs for her chocolate stash (j/k), dreams of her shower to come, and wishes she had instant transmission so she could go ... experiment*
^_~ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 20:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was HOT! I don't think a cold shower will help me tonight. |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: January 29, 2003 19:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy FUCK!! That was ...... MMMM!!! *hentai grin*
I Love your work ! This fic was HOT , sizzing , scorching , Bien Caliente!!!! *smirKS*
Keep it upp! Cant wait to see what u come up with Next !
I need a smoke WHEW!!!! |
Reviewed By: kaila-chan On: January 29, 2003 18:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder how you felt when you wrote this... I can say that I never say a PWP story soooooo good like that. Continue to write more... And you could do sequel, don't you think? :P And BTW, the whip thing is absolutly cool ! I never thought about that... :) My night will be fill with good dream I think :)
Continue your excellent work!
Kaila-Chan |
Reviewed By: jessica On: January 29, 2003 18:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the lemon keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was such an honor to beta read this ^^ I loved it!!
I've never read such a long lemon b4, and it didn't get tiring. ALot of long lemons just repeat and repeat itself but this ^^ It just kept on leaping up with new surprises and new lemon ideas that I've never read of b4!! ^^
Great job ^^ |
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