"Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anime~Angel On: April 10, 2003 21:30 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *cackles* Shippou is the best. *continues to cackle* YOU are the best. *snicker* Make Shippou create and illusion for me please! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 09, 2003 19:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it! I only found one mistake, and it was in the spring. She threatened him wtih the "sit" word, but that meant he would have sat anyway. It was when she came back from the hut. Other than that, it was the best fanfic I have read yet. I love it~Write more, pleez! |
Reviewed By: Shiari On: February 20, 2003 20:17 CST Comment/Review: Wai squeeee! nicely written! ::grinleers happily to herself:: dangnabbit..... i wanna hanyou of my own! |
Reviewed By: Lady_Ravenclaw [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 20:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: all i wanted to saw was that i really liked that fic, and i think your an amazing writer...and i read another one by you, archery and noticed.... they are being watched by some1 in both of them.. sure is a strange little twist but works out, anyway i hope you continue to write TTYL
Squuish The Cheeky Monkey From Peach Shnops Island |
Reviewed By: Ineyul340 On: February 09, 2003 11:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think that was a cute fic.
It was really creative and I love it when Inuyasha and Kagome pair |
Reviewed By: Lea_D [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 20:08 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Giggles* THat was cute.. who knew shippo wasn't that naieve. I liked it... |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 12:07 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LOL!!! I loved it!! Go Shippo!!!!!! He can create an illusion for me like that any time he gets ready to...... |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 05, 2003 20:37 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Shippou you are so naughty^_^ Now Sango must have known about the basics, at least. That was great. keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Mia On: January 31, 2003 21:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Shippou sneaky? I love it. This was wonderful and the lemon was hot. Great fic. |
Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 16:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Aww..that was so sweet. What a clever plot for a pwp! I thought Shippou's spell was so neat. Of course that was a fabulous lemon. Very nicely written. You definatly need to do more with this. You have a nice understanding of the characters.
Great job! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 31, 2003 13:59 CST Comment/Review: Ah, Shippou! That was a great idea. Lovely story. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 02:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was ... so... *squeals*
Damn, if I didn't wish I had a little kitsune to make a hot illusion like that ... I'd be crazy. ^.~
*snickers* And looks like he got an extra bonus too. ;)
That was just ... awesome. I always did love the rain ... and it looks like I'll never tire of it. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tara On: January 31, 2003 08:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ohh my where the heck did you come up with that Idea.........not that i am saying that it was a bad idea....awsome fic soo hurry up with the next damn chapter. Tara |
Reviewed By: xi_hou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 22:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You can't see me, but I'm giving you a standing ovation right now. Fantastic (and steamy) writing. ;-) |
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