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Title: Question!
Reviewed By: Assassin of the Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking this so far, but you say its a sequel? Where can I read "Big Decision"?
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 18:42 CDT
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omg! I finally get to read this fic (yay). I have wated for it for sooo long. I know it was wrtten a while ago but i have not had the time to read it(wants to scream from all the school work). This was soo good keep the good work with writing.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Death consums all On: April 02, 2004 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok Now I'd loke to ask you a few things. 1: have you had this happen to you guys or is this just realy good "Getting into character" 2: I love how you put the pain and I know how they felt... I had to go through that and I bet people in Mass. could here my yells (now very ashamed) broken with death 3: love the story best ever and so forth 4: if you wont to write me my online adress is RainingWhiteFire@AOL.com
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Title: Time for Healing
Reviewed By: Kachinadancer2 On: February 19, 2004 00:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally fine...you rock my world.
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: thegirl On: November 25, 2003 15:53 CST
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I like all the angst. i kind of have an issue with the repitition of plots between this fic and other fics but i still have to read them. they're like pringles...or something...good stuff.. I like lyn and andrew. they make me smile...ryo's so overdramatic with his "oh gods!" and "dear gods!" take that as good or bad. Keep writing and i'll keep reading. I swear you need to set up a 12 step withdrawal program...
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Reviewed By: Icewind [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 14:33 CDT
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That was evil, ending the chapter in the way you did. I love it. lol.
Normally I stay away from OOC fics and I'll admit that it did turn me off at first. But then I kept reading and followed the story with each update. It grew on me. I really like Lyn and Andrew. And seeing Ryo and Dee in the situation you put them in was intriguing.
Update soon. I look forward to future chapters. Dear God, I wonder if Ryo is okay. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Faithful Reader On: August 09, 2003 00:21 CDT
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Rharghhh?! *sorrowful whine* Hulk sorry if Hulk offend, but Hulk waiting on edge! |
Reviewed By: Faithful Reader On: July 30, 2003 17:44 CDT
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Rharghhh!!! Hulk smash if no update! |
Reviewed By: FeathersinHair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 10:11 CDT
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Arrrggghhhh!!! Curse the both of you, you've finally done what I'd thought was impossible- made me *care* about original characters! Drew and Lyn are just adorable, in that good, non-teeny-bopper sense. I would imagine that Dee would have an even more difficult time recovering
from the events of chapter 28, since it involved someone he cared about, and it wasn't just himself suffering. (Noble-types are prone to this sort of thing, don'tchaknow) |
Reviewed By: SaiyanTrombone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang... I've been reading in chunks over the last 4 days and managed to read all of "The Big Decision" and then this fic. I am very impressed, to say the least. Your plotline is great, and there are very few lulls. This story, especially in some of the more intense chapters, is absolutely gripping... The only thing I can say now is: Can't wait to find out what happens! |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 13:55 CDT
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That was intense! The thing that made me sickest was the sound of the bat hitting Drew's skull. Lyn's a good actor. He almost had me convinced. Marlo is a sick woman. Can hardly wait for the update, even if you plan on inflicting more pain on the guys and your faithful readers...Bring on the next, please! |
Reviewed By: Emily On: July 23, 2003 03:27 CDT
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This story is fantastic. I love it's thorough evilness. Dee blind and now humiliated! Drew bleeding away on the floor! Bikky & Cal terrified! Lyn's fate hanging in the balance and Ryo forced to take action despite the pain in his back! But the possibility of JJ having shot his colleague? - that is wickedness worthy of Marlo herself! You must really, really hate JJ. Poor JJ (I seem to say that a lot).
Can't wait to read next chapter |
Reviewed By: FeathersinHair [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 23:54 CDT
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Oooo, ooo.... What a horrific update! You leave our Heroes in Peril (pronounced in the "Holy Grail" way), but you've advanced the story enough that we can't justifiably whine about it! |
Reviewed By: FeathersinHair (meggielawrence@yahoo.com On: July 06, 2003 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... am I so wrong for wanting even more Dee-angst? (Okay, I probably am.) You've let Ryo get so many cuddles, Dee needs some more, too! And if that neccesitates whomping on the boy, so be it! (This would be followed by evil laughter if the review section had a soundtrack.) |
Reviewed By: koneko On: July 05, 2003 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, again superb chapter of my fav fanfic... I only hope that bitch will die and Dee will regain his sight. Now it's my only wish. I hate people who hurt others and go without punishment! I must say I love your lemon scene, the way in which Dee make love to Ryo and Ryo's timidity about sexlife is beautiful and Lyn and Drew...They are the best original characters which I have ever met in fanfictions. |
Reviewed By: CrimsonBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You put up a new chapter. Grrr, how dare that bitch come back!? And just when things were starting to get good for everybody too. I hope somebody beats the shit out of her, or at least Duke rips her face off. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. *Bows to Wildfyre and Irish* you two are the queen of FAKE fanfiction |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:02 CDT
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Love the way the plot is thickening. Glad to have the bitch back with a vengeance. Oh, my God, Dee getting his sight back? Ryo getting some much-needed education from the king of the one-night stand. Wild times in Smurfland. A fine wild Irish stew of a chapter. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next. |
Reviewed By: CrimsonBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 00:57 CDT
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Evil. Just Evil. How could you just end it like that? *burst into tears* You can't let Dee and Drew bite the dust, you just can't. Well actually you can, but please don't hurt the bishies.
Also, poor Marlo, losing her baby like that. I understand why she's so angry now, though she's going about it all wrong.
Oh well, I'll be awaiting your next chapter |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me, Shuichi-san from ff.net!! I came here to check out my story, and I saw this and read it! Another good chapter. All the boys are getting love sick. -_-;; I really cannot wait to see how Dee and Ryo are going to react to each other... *bites fingernails, in suspense* -_-;; Do keep up the good work, guys!! |
Reviewed By: CrimsonBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just gotta add my two cents, I absolutely love this fic! It's almost like a soap opera. i swear this fic has almost made me cry so many times. And I so love Andrew and Lynn, soon people will be writing fanfics about them ^_^ and please have Dee get better so he can kick Rose's ass. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sastified sigh*
JUST what I needed. I'm horribly ill just now...well, not horribly, just miserably, and signing on to another chapter of this beyond extradorniary fic (please excuse my spelling) made my night. *fixes Irish and Wildefyre with a glare* You'd BETTER fix things between my bois!!!! Don't make me come over there!!!! Gods...poor Ryo...poor everyone, but poor Ryo!!! I usually relate to Dee better, but *shakes head* I'm really looking forward to HOW you fix things...*meaningful look*
Really, I'd be happy to follow Drew and Lyn and Ryo and Dee for the rest of my natural life and into the next, so you have to write about them forever and ever and ever.
*nods*
Thank you BOTH!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lan On: May 07, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellen fanfic although it hurts to see how Ryo and Dee suffer. Nevertheless I have read all chapters and I must admit that you two have a talent for writing. And please, please update!!
But don't rush it! I will look forward to see the next chapter.
Regards! |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 15:58 CDT
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That chapter was fully packed. I never would have thought that Dee would lash out at Andrew, much less abuse Ryo. I'm really appalled at his cruelty. That really came as a shock and almost even more so, breaking the property of other people and making a scene when young children were present. He sounds so lame with his "sorry". And the things he said!! And it wasn't a private fight either. He said those things in front of An and Lyn. How embarrassing for all of them but especially for Ryo, his sexual performance held up for ridicule. That was heavy! Still, families fight. I'd like to know why Dee reacted so strongly in assuming that Ryo screwed up. He, as much as anyone, whould know that justice isn't always served in a courtroom. It happens to a police officer's cases with depressing frequency. To me it seemed that maybe there was something deeper going on with Dee that even he didn't understand. I'd really like to see Dee's honest reactions in the aftermath of his outburst. I'd like to see Dee having a little one on one with his conscience.
It's true. Guys do that. Feeling unmasculine due to work stress? Lash out at your partner. Make your partner the whipping boy for your frustrations. Makes for an unequal marriage. Women do it too.
One of my favorite parts of this chapter was Lyn was talking about his family in Ireland and how you get to his home.
I'd like Lyn to open up to Ryo on what it is to invite abuse or at least his understanding of it. Lyn's a lawyer who counsels against abuse and yet sought it out. Ryo has some masochistic tendencies in this story. Enabling.
It was a very interesting chapter. I'm looking forward to the next. It hurts me to have lost so much respect for Dee. He's not just going to have to win Ryo over. He's going to have to win me over. I don't know if you guys can do it. I sure hope so. |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: May 08, 2003 01:55 CDT
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*grabs authors and refuses to let them go* Okay you two are not allowed to go free until Dee and Ryo are a happy couple! *Chains authors to a computer!* |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 20:59 CDT
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Whoa, that was a rude awakening for Ryo. Yeah, if I thought there were going to be any morning after lovey-dovey shenanigans, he and I were both sorely mistaken. I'd like to smack J.J. and kick Berkley's balls over a goal post. And now the vicious press all over this like maggots. Oh, God, if Dee's pride was wounded before when so few knew about the case, imagine how he'll feel with the sordid details revealed in sensationalof media hype. Man, if I were Dee, I'd be back at the orphanage sobbing on Penguin's shoulder right now asking for help. I'd really love to see Dee clean Berkley's clock. This was a very angsty update, a bit of a shock, like a pail full of ice water in the face after the sweetness of the night before. Not that I'm objecting. Bikky seems nicer. I like that. Dee was so adorable fixing breakfast for his lover even though he had performance anxiety. Nice to see Lyn in full intimidation mode. I'd like to see Ryo more confident about handling Berkley's advances. Isn't there a support group he can go to? I'm not quite sure why Ryo is such an easy mark when it comes to Berkley. Ryo is passive/aggressive when he needs to assert himself with the man and show him what's unacceptable behavior. It must be something from Ryo's past that he hasn't resolved yet. Your update was unbelievably fast. I think you posted the update in less time than it took for the page to open on this unbelievably slow site. FF.net is deceptively fast. It took me very quickly several times to the page where your story should have been and said,"sorry schmuck, come back in a "few" minutes. So, it must have been hard for you to upload, so thanks so much for the update and your patience in posting it. If your reviews slow down and I hope that they don't,the uncooperative sites might be a reason. |
Reviewed By: Flash On: April 25, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing a wonderful job of this one! I am dawn into the story and I deeply feel for both Ryo and Dee. HEck, I am emotional over all of these wonderful characters! You have given them life, personalities, and a wonderful humanity that will never be duplicated. I eagery await the next instalment/ |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 20:17 CDT
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I read this chapter a few times with interest. There was a lot of going on. I wish Dee could show a little more heroism. With the way, he's been acting, he's kind of hard to like. I thought Lyn in this chapter was judgmental and interfering. He who is without sin...I mean, Lyn has a past. Where does he get off trying to get Ryo to dump Dee? I also thought he was condescending to Dee. I love the story, but I didn't like either of them much in this chapter. They were trying to be friendly, but it looked like hard work. Is it that Lyn and Dee have similar personalities that makes them clash? Looking forward to some resolution to the on-going tension in your next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:29 CDT
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First things...oh, this chapter had me grinning and sighing with relief. God what a relief!!!!Dee and Ryo kissing. The King of Blushes in his element. The good feeling among the four of them---there was a lot to like in this chapter and I liked it all. Just to clarify the matter of your output. You guys aren't slow at updating. Not even remotely. As a reader, I feel spoiled, but hopefully, not rotten. Thanks so much. Don't let your personal lives suffer on my account, but you obviously get a kick out of writing the story, so bring on the next chapter with all it's lemon-fresh joy as soon as humanly possible. So far the pace has been inhuman, but we readers love that. Thanks for the update. |
Reviewed By: gokus_girl_dbz@hotmail.com On: April 16, 2003 14:41 CDT
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Hey girls! This fic sure is great! Please keep up the really awsome work and I'll really be looking forward to lemon scenes! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 00:32 CDT
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Oh, man! Much of this was just so sad! That first scene between Dee and Ryo--so much pain. I really felt for Dee--his awful sense of shame and self-loathing. And Ryo so lost without Dee. So much pain. A great chapter. Glad I stayed up late tonight and got to read it. Fifty chapters sounds great...Bring it on!!! |
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