| "Time for Healing" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 00:20 CST
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Pure pleasure. Great chapter. All the hot bishonen either suffering, sick or both. What more could I ask for except hot lemonade--It does a body good! But I'm willing to wait. Things are getting intense between Ryo and Dee aren't they? Thanks for another miraculously fast update. |
Reviewed By: Kei Kage On: April 03, 2003 00:04 CST
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I have been reading this from the begginning and I must say I am very pleased with your work. Thank you for sharing this with the public. I look forward to the rest of this work as each new installment comes out. |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 00:00 CST
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I enjoyed the hell out of this chapter despite the fact that it took what seemed like hours to load. I must have liked it because even though it took hours for the review page to load, I still stuck around because I felt compelled to extend some kudos to spur you on for the benefit of Fake fans world-wide, but especially me. Yes, there was angst and lemon-fresh joy. WOW. Thoroughly looking forward to a reunion of Dee and Ryo, though the union of An and Lyn was not without its satisfactions, at all. Tea with lemon would also be a good combination, fond as Ryo is of tea and Dee. But of course, I'm dying to have Dee share the agonizing details of the rape with Ryo, because I think only Ryo can make him heart-whole again. I think their heart is broken and longs to be mended and with Dee and Ryo it's one heart. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO enjoying this fic...it's pathetic, I check every day for updates, even though I KNOW there won't be an update the very next day after a chapter is posted!!!
As far as doing it as an epic, or splitting it up, I don't really have a preferance. Just so long as it goes on, and on, and on, and on.... |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: March 24, 2003 02:17 CST
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I love your guys work and I dont care what you do with the series if you split it up or leave it all together all I am waiting for and hoping comes soon is that Dee and Ryo get back together! They need each other so much and the way this story is written you can feel the pain that they are going though.
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 19:46 CST
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Hey, I loved it, too. I like the idea of the big-ass novel. Keep weaving the themes and then there's the discipline of focus and when you're finished you'll be able to say, "Damn, I just wrote a big-ass novel." You've still got the plot to think of too. There's still a woman rapist at large, and plenty of bait at the 27th precinct. Not that I'm in a hurry. |
Reviewed By: jamc On: March 23, 2003 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is one of the best fanfics I’ve read so far. It’s 1:15am and I have just finished reading all 13 chapters in one long marathon session. I’m sure by now that my roommate thinks I’ve turned into some internet junky. I can’t wait to read what happens next. Keep writing!! |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:44 CST
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This was a great chapter. One of the best yet. So much feeling. It was good to have a look at Dee through his friend's eyes and show just how much things have changed for him. Then the talk about Ryo, and Dee's agonized lies. Wrenching. Thanks for the update. |
Reviewed By: KitsuneKyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 12:13 CST
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You guys are keeping me on tenterhooks! i love this new side of Dee! But tell me, please, will it take much longer for Dee and Ryo to get back together????The suspense is killing me! |
Reviewed By: C. L On: March 14, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps her hands happily* Oh, this is really good! I think I've said it before, actually I know I've said it, but it is the truth!!!!
I really liked this chapter because how you let us follow Dree and his start on learning how to cope being blind. Really great that you let us "see" how Drew is teaching and helping him.
Looking forward for the next chapter.
LoL |
Reviewed By: C. L On: March 11, 2003 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was really a great chapter! As I tend to lean a little more to Dee than Ryo you guys really gave me a treat. ;-) Please continue doing that!!!
Loved the way how you wrote it when Dee and Drew enterd Dee's apartment. I mean, going back to where somone attacked you must be very hard. Please update soon!! LoL |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:14 CST
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So grateful for another update. Again, I like the banter between Dee and Drew. Drew seems to bring out Dee's strong side, the side he needs. Nice tension in the scene. I really felt Dee's blindness and woundedness in this and it was touching. I liked the way you reminded us of the plot again with the lingering perfume. Hey, I think I know where you're going with this. Cool! |
Reviewed By: Wildefyre_Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 13:55 CST
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This is in response to the review left by Java... I cannot state enough times that Irish and I have never tried to hide the fact that we weren't writing "IN CHARACTER" with Dee or with Ryo. We are not following the manga persay, we are not doing anything "canon" we are just writing! Dee and Ryo can and will hug people other then each other so if you have a problem with it, then I'm sorry dear but I won't change my style of writing just to make someone else happy! If you feel this way about Drew hugging Dee, then just wait, there's more to come. Boy is there more to come! *Giggles*
HUGS MAKE THE WORLD GO AROUND!! Thank you...
Oh and to all the readers: Chapter 11 will be up sometime this weekend. |
Reviewed By: Wildefyre_Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 11:11 CST
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Well... since mediaminer doesnt leave email addresses and I really dont want to wait until the next chapter to address this, here goes nothing.
The issue of hugging. Not all people feel safe and secure when hugged. True. Obviously Dee does not. He blushes, he makes a joke, he is not comfertable. Thats why its 'made a big deal of' in the first place. Because Dee isnt sure what to do with it. Touch is a very important part of being a sentiant being, even only vaugley so. Even animals need to be touched. Most empathetic peoples first instinct when another is hurting is to reach out and touch them, try and comfort them. Andrew's reaching out to hug Dee was his first natural reaction. It was written as thus. We were not trying to 'make a point' in fact I highly doubt wildefyre or I even thought twice about this paragraph and at all. Im not even sure what 'our point' would have been. Anyway. Of course alll of you are more then entittled to your opinions, and I know I have asked frequently for constructive critisim. Just this last one through me fo ra real loop since at least physicaly it was the 'natural flow of the fic' wildefyre and I wrote it with out a second thought. Anyway, thanks for reviews everyone :) we are always glad for them. |
Reviewed By: Java On: March 07, 2003 10:28 CST
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I like this fic very much but I think that you’ve become heavy handed
With that “hug” stuff. It somehow feels as if you are struggling to make
A point if so then don’t forget that not all people feel secure or loved
When hugged , not because they consider that a sign of weakness,
(The funny thing is exactly those how enjoy hugs regard it as weakness
and not vice versa ) but the simple fact that they feel trapped and
uncomfortable when hugged and safe and loved when their privet
sphere is respected.
Every individual has his own reactions . Well It seems that I’m loosing
The topic . I just wanted to say take care that this “hug” business
Don’t ruins the fluency of your fic. If the characters are hugging
Each other let it be, simply a part of the fiction so that dose not
Look like a bad attempt to convince Somebody.
After all almost in all Fake fics there hugs and kisses and ...
But you never pay to them much attention , they are simply a part
of the whole fic . get what I mean in this fic We have a wonderful
fiction + sentences about hugs or hugs which feel enforced on the characters. |
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