| "Time for Healing" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 04, 2003 01:01 CST
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*near tears, high keening sob sound fills this post* You guys are so very good. I am at the edge of my seat. And I shall wait with as much calmess and patiance *spelling is evil* as I can stand cuz this story is worth it!
And I could be wrong....but I have seen much better spelling and grammer so far ;) *you asked for praise and constuctive critisisum *sp*, right? Well, the characterzation *suffer my evil spelling! suffer!* of Dee and Ryo IMOP is pretty real/on the mark. Slight changes/tweak were noticable at the start but they work very nicely.:)thus end the constuctive critaziume*sp*,
more praise. praise, praise and more and more prasie. Topped off with a nummy idea for a Ryo/Dee fan art. Oooo. *runs to go find art stuff and to be happy drawing as she waits for next chapter. :D* |
Reviewed By: gokus_girl_dbz@hotmail.com On: February 03, 2003 22:09 CST
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Hey guys,
You maybe writing them out of character but damn, you do it so well!! I totally love your stories and I am dying to hear more. You guys have been doing really great together on this fic. Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: C. L On: February 25, 2003 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I loved the latest chapter. Very nice dialog and I loved the way how you showed us, the readers, glimpses of how Dee and Beeky felt.
LoL |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry with more soon! The anticipation is killing me! |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 22:51 CST
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I love the angst in Chapter One. It's positively delicious. Thanks a heap. Bring on the second at your leisure, but soon if possible. The partnership seems fairly seamless. Another dynamic duo is spawned? |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 31, 2003 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAwwwwwwww MMMaaaannnnn,...*sob,sob*....Soooooooooooo,...*sniff*....SSSaaaaaddddd,....poor dee,....*sniffles*.....hope he will heal fully,...with ryo help and love,...*sssssiigggghhhhh*...those two're SSSoooooooooo SSweeeettttt together Neeeee???...*sniff,sob*....the both of ya did a VVVVVeeeerryyyyyy great job of writing this sequel,...it's VVVeeeerrryyyyyy beautiful and full of deep emotions,...the way ya describes the love and deep devotions between our beloved couple,...it's touching and VVVeeeryyyyy moving,....it's really makes me wana cry together with them,...*sniffles*....VVVeeerrryyyyyy well done ya guys,...*sniff*...it's AAAAmmmmaaaaazinggggg,...*sniff*....keep-up the good work kay,...*sob*...and continue soon,...*hugs*....till yer-next chapter,...*sniffles*...JJJJJJaaaaaaaaaaaaa,....*sniff*...and,....*sob,sob*....GGGGaaanbbaaateeeeeeeeeeee-Neeeeeeeee!!^_~!!
p/s;those soundtracks from lighthouse
really is a VVerrrryyyyy cool idea,...Looovveeeeeee them,...*grins*..Jaaaa-Nee! |
Reviewed By: C. L On: January 31, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles happily* You two are doing such a good job! Poor Dee, and I hope that Ryo's patience and strength wont abandond him. |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: January 31, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good IMOP. Don't rush it. You two are both fantastic writers, so take you time and get it done right/good. Good things come to those who wait. Yes. Just- don't end it real quickly. Build it up. Enjoy the evilness of making us beg for more.
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: magegirl On: March 27, 2003 06:10 CST
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Hey, I just finished chapter 14. I love what you guys are doing. I hope Ryo gets better. I'm all for the series idea. Anything to keep this going, I don't want it to end! I enjoyed the story you started on Lyn and Andrew. Keep dishing out the quality fics! |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 23:13 CDT
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Good story. I've been reading for awhile now and every time I think the story is about the end you pick it back up again. You two compliment each other really well. The only thing that bugs me is the amount of sappyness. I mean emotional, yes, but not to the point that they are blubbering over absolutly everything. I must say that you overdid it a bit on that lst chapter especially the part where Dee is talking to Bicky. Thats just my personal opinion though. Other than that this is deffinetly one of my favorite stories of all and any fanfiction/original stories and one of the very few on my short 'favorites' list.
Cant wait for the next chapter.
- Storm
ps. Marlo had better be caught and punished. |
Reviewed By: yo On: January 31, 2003 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story |
Reviewed By: C. L On: February 13, 2003 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Love the way your telling this story. It's great! Making Dee blind was brilliant, and it'll be nice and very interesting, seeing how he'll cope with that. I hope Lyn and Andrew can help them, and 'specially Ryo. LoL |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really REALLY enjoy this fic. Frankly I don't really think ANYONE is out of character...Dee strikes me as the demanding type when he's whole, stands to reason he'd be completly wrapped up in his own misery and relying on everyone else to make it "better" and taking it out on everyone.
Bikky is...well he's twelve, and you both do a wonderful job of capturing that. They both want all of Ryo's attention, and he wants to give it to them...but as you've demonstrated, the strain is just too much.
I ADORE your original characters...just ADORE them!!! I personally would be VERY interested in seeing a fic focussing on them and their backstory.
I'm always so delighted when I see this fic updated...ought to have told you both before, but better late than not at all. I really REALLY love this fic. LOVE IT.
Thank you both, for putting so much time and effort into it...I know what goes into writing a collaboration fic. *nods* Lots of work. The end result so far has been very cohesive. You write well together. I personally hope this fic goes on for a LOOOOOOOOOONG time.
*grins*
Later,
Talon |
Reviewed By: C. L On: April 04, 2003 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always. Loved the chapter. I've said it before and I'll probably do it again, but I really like that you are writing how people have to cope in normal life after something awful has happend to them. Please keep it up!
LoL |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 07, 2003 07:48 CST
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I made my way to the mini page for Andrew and Lyn-me like, where did you find the pics?
The music link- I love it. I got the first 3 tracks down loaded and saved and am gonna do a CD once the fic is done. Very good songs.
You guys worked you butts off for this fic and it shows. |
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