| "Mmm... Kinky!" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Me On: April 18, 2003 04:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my. |
Reviewed By: chibi On: April 17, 2003 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likie ur fic! umm..... if possible can u put in a yuri pan/bra or a b/cc. ummm do a v/b or a g/b..... well looking foreward to much MUCH more! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 22:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
O-O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LAter! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
So perverse..... so erotic.... -twitch-
My braaaain! ;_; |
Reviewed By: red devil slayer On: March 23, 2003 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEcauseTHere ALl gay bitch |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*screams happily and glomps you*
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PERFECT ending!!! Could you be any more of a genius!? no.. i dont think its humanly possible!!
YAY!
LOVE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 06:10 CST
Comment/Review:
That was all most scary! I was really getting into it when I realized it was Ginyu. I had never read a lemon fic with Ginyu, and I've read a lot.
Hmmmm.....wonder if Frieza will pick up where Vegeta left off. Hahahahaha!!!!
Waiting........................................................................ |
Reviewed By: Bomber Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Yummy yummy sex! *bounces around* I love this so far, and I hope there's going to be more. Yay! |
Reviewed By: Black Dragons Gothic child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was realy realy realy good is there gonna be another chapter??!?!?!?!?!!!? |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: March 09, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are by far, the most EVIL person on the planet!! WRITE A THIRD FOR THIS! PLEASE!? I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER!! (not like I don't already, but you get the picture ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Seremira On: March 10, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... Mirai and Chibi? How chibi? ........ Dende forgive us for our oh so guilty pleasures!!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, as weird as this is going to sound, u didn't do too bad on the 8th chapter cause it's not like u made it 20 pages or anything. Lol. Personally, I'm a lot more scared of viewing chapter 5... *shudders* But what I'm wondering is could u put a "17/Trunks" in here somewhere? Didn't think u'd mind using Trunks 3 times, since u've used Goku and Vegeta so much. Plus, 17's got way too much sex appeal to go unnoticed! *hentai smirk* I know ur capable of it... |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Aack, forget the last part of the previous comment, I have a short term memory, but sequels r always good... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
...
o.O
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
I just can't believe you did that!!
*pales
This is just soooo gross!
I just can't believe you did that!
And so good!
I mean, for the squickyness of this it was actually pretty good since you did it from Goku's point of view....
... but...
it's still GROSS!!!
I will definetely think twice before I ever challenge you to anything again!
Now I have to find a way to top this..
Hmm..
...
maybe I should paint a pic on this..
..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
ACK! IMAGE!
*hits her own head
TWACK!
TWACK!
TWACK!
*smirk
only one thing: In "Eye of the tiger", which is the sequel to "Eye of the Dragon" Vegeta was the panther and Goku was the tiger, but thats artist's freedom.. *ggg
I must bow to the master, Jady.. the master of squickyness! |
Reviewed By: Kis On: February 09, 2003 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG...I have read Serapha's fic before... so...ano...
...you actually wrote it!!! *lmao!* |
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