| "Broken*" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Title: Classic
Reviewed By: LongTimeInuFan On: November 23, 2022 18:35 PST
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Probably the first fanfic I ever read and I still come back and
reread it every year. Just a terrific, fun little story. There are
a few of these classic Inuyasha ones that really set the standard
and so few have come since. Wonderful fic no I hope the author kept
writing in whatever genre. Too much talent not to keep improving on
it.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2013 19:57 PDT
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Squee! That was an awesome and cute chapter. Hawt too! ^_^ Good job. Thanks for finishing and with such a detailed chapter. The stuff with Souta was hilarious. Nice touch. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2013 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, an old classic, indeed. I remember this one from years ago, and I loved it then and still love it now. Can't remember it in enough detail to notice what all you might've updated in your revisions, but I certainly didn't notice any flaws (except for a few random glitches like somebody else pointed out that are MM's fault and not yours) so whatever you spruced up, good job! Makes me think about all my older stories I've yet to update, LOL. One of these days. But so keep up the awesome work! So glad to know that somebody else from back in the day is still alive and well and still playing with the fandom. :-) |
Reviewed By: entropistanon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2013 08:27 PDT
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Interesting ending, although I'm not sure about Inuyasha musing about having kids so readily. He doesn't really seem to like them much. Of course, this could also be my bias against having kids myself talking, so I can't say I'm coming from a pure point of view. One thing that you may want to check out - a few of your dialogue tags toward the middle and end of the chapter were somehow replaced with "h" and "g", occassionally "c". It was a bit difficult to read at times, just as a heads up. Great story. Thanks for sharing. |
Title: :D more!
Reviewed By: Amanda5763022 On: March 10, 2013 17:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I finished all your new chapters can't wait for the rest :) |
Reviewed By: entropistanon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2013 09:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I just reviewed the previous chapter of this story on ff.net, but given that I've taken leave of that website, I thought I would continue reviewing here instead. I was curious, does the well work according to a particular mechanism that we'll know more about in later chapters? I'd be glad that the McGuffin was explained a bit, not that it's particularly important. I'm still really enjoying your story and can't wait to read more. |
Title: Revised
Reviewed By: Amanda576302 On: March 07, 2013 21:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I favorite your story along time ago and I got emails you rewrote it. I don't really remember the first one but this is still pretty Interesting hope you finish it :) |
Reviewed By: Nicka On: May 17, 2010 21:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent story
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just found your story and couldn't let this opportunity pass without telling you how much enjoyment it brought to me. it was well thought out and well executed. your characterizations were great. your writing style kept me engrosed in the story from start to finish. the ending made me smile. it left me satisfied. i hope that whatever your doing these days, you are continuing your writing. you have a great gift, and it would be a shame if you did not continue to exercise it.
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Title: Had to say, once more....
Reviewed By: iloveanimeacartoons (NSI) On: December 15, 2008 10:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...ADORE...this fic! CONSTANT reread! Can't get enough! This was really a great find! You're so very talented! Merry Christmas to ya!
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Reviewed By: LunaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 17:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WUVED THIS STORY!! God I wish I could you something higher than a 10...oh wait I CAN!! I give it a 100!! So much detail and romance! Very creative! Terrific plot! And I loved how Kagome yelled at Inuyasha, she's too nice in the show and you really showed the fire she has inside of her. BRAVO!! BRAVA!! LunaStar* wuvs you! ~LunaStar*
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 16:30 PDT
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Very nice, entertaining story. I thought Inuyasha caught a lot of flak in this story, but it was still good! (obviously, I read the whole thing in one sitting! lol)
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: May 15, 2008 15:17 PDT
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Aww, I just loved this fic! The tension, the drama, the fluff! You just can't beat some good old Kagome Inuyasha loving! Wonderful!
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Title: iloveanimecartoons (OOPS, didn't sign on...LOL!) I picked this up in chp 11...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Three weeks of missing her during the day, dreaming of her during the night, wanting more than anything to go back and fix the mistake he'd made of allowing her out of his sight. You're a poet and you don't even KNOW it! Hyuu Hyuu!
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Title: um, yeah...
Reviewed By: iloveanim...u get the drift *sigh* can't seem to stop commenting, today... On: May 05, 2007 11:03 PDT
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Oh, and PS: the was just WRONG at the end of chap 10! lol!
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