| "Broken*" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 02:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH no lemon you put all us readers through all that stress and we don't get a lemon...just kidding it was a really cool story I laughed I cryed I got pissed it was great I'll keep an eye out for more of your work. Thanks again for the wicked story |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: March 16, 2003 13:41 PST
Comment/Review:
Whoo, what an ending! I loved the Inuyasha worrying/angst.
Lovely story. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Claire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 14:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is AWESOME!!!!!!! I've been waiting for you to update, and I just noticed today that you'd posted ch. 9 and 10. Needless to say, that greatly improved my day. Now, I just have to figure out how to keep myself from going insane over waiting for more. Needless to say, patience isn't my strong suit. ::grins:: Keep up the good work!!!!!! AND POST MORE!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shi no Miko On: February 08, 2003 23:51 PST
Comment/Review:
waaaaaaa! cliffhanger cliffhanger cliffhanger! nooooo! update update update! yeah! ^_^ that was horrendously cute!!! i love it soooo much! |
Reviewed By: Anna (nu_chan@hotmail.com) On: February 09, 2003 16:14 PST
Comment/Review:
This has to be one of *THE* best Inuyasha fics I've ever read. It's really nice to see some angst that isn't stemming from Inuyasha's relationship with Kikyo. You capture the characters perfectly, and discribe their emotions so well that the reader can actully feal the hurt that the characters are feeling. The plot is so origional and engaging that I can't wait to see what happens next. And the way you write those angsty arguments... dang! You have some real writing talent. Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: wretched1 On: February 10, 2003 13:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must write the rest of this story. i hate clifhangers as much as I hate britney spears(who should be tied to a pole and left in a cage of very hungry tigers after being dunked in a tub of fish chum. you must keep writing this fic. |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 15:23 PST
Comment/Review:
That was not a very funny joke! My heart just about stopped!
Write soon, i'll be waiting.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 14, 2003 11:52 PST
Comment/Review:
Geez... *pats heart* I think you almost killed me putting 'the end' there, so simply like it was supposed to be there or something.
Wow, great progess on the story! The new events were certainly something... I can't wait to see how long Kagome is going to wait to come back. Is Inuyasha going to make himself sick from worry and wondering if she's ever coming back? |
Reviewed By: Bishiglomper On: February 08, 2003 10:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOhhhh! i love this story! at first i was kinda mad that u would make inu so..so...NOT INU! but now this is like the best story EVER!!!!!!
at first i thaught that kagome just absent mindedly blocked him from goin thru the well... i duuno. first thing that popped in my head! wich is a VERY RARE ocassion O.o
oh well. Jaa ne!
BTW..YOU BETTER WRIE MORE OR ELSE YOU WILL HAVE TO SUFFER THE WRATH OF THE ALL MIGHTY HIGH DUCKIES!!! o.O |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: February 07, 2003 19:04 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my! You almost had one seriously pissed reader on your hands when you had 'the end' written so nicely there!! LOL!!! My jaw literarly jropped!! ^_^ But I enjoy a good praticaly joke or two!! As long as you update soon!! ^_^v |
Reviewed By: Gingersnap On: February 07, 2003 15:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant. You're truly a talented writer.
(you're really Rumiko Takahashi, aren't you???) ;) |
Reviewed By: Lilly On: February 07, 2003 05:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH! THIS IS WONDERFUL! PLEASE HURRY AND FINISH IT BEFORE I GO CRAZY! |
Reviewed By: Sonomi On: February 06, 2003 21:23 PST
Comment/Review:
uh-oooh, you're making my head spin with ideas of why Inuyasha couldn't go threw the well and when does Kagome come back...or IF she comes back. |
Reviewed By: Anna On: February 06, 2003 21:10 PST
Comment/Review:
Hi, I think that your fic. is really good. It portrays both Inu-yasha's and Kagome's feelings very well. I also like the way you show Inu-yasha's conflicting emotions about Kagome. I love your fanfic! It's great!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: February 06, 2003 20:06 PST
Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo where is the rest *pouts* please more please. Why end it there. I hate cliffhangers. MORE.
SHADY |
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