| "Choosing your Path:An Inu-Yasha Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: ONFG
Reviewed By: InuyashasLoverTigerLily [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 14:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU MAKE HIM HUMAN!!!! inuyasha is supposed to be hanyou! not human! thats why his name is INUyasha! i hate this story...it was good until that.
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Reviewed By: lilpegasus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its really good! Put up the next chapter soon..... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Calinda On: July 10, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it, keep writing i can't wait for the next chapter(s). |
Reviewed By: Kagome (again) On: July 05, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
No offence but this is hardly hentai..unless you finishi it....please!!!!! Your pritty good!
Sayo! |
Reviewed By: Kagome^_^ On: July 05, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well overall it was great but you needed to be more original...a whole chapter was based on an episode of Inuyasha...But was still good. Dont leave too many cliff hangers and finish the story for goodness sakes!! I wanna know the ending.. Continue your good wrighting. Oh and its Sankontessou as one word and Kirara is only in the japanese version it depends on which one you watched so Kilala is gramatically correct. oh and not to be critical but its yatta as one word as well. Loved your story...Finish...onegai!!! Ja!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 09, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my....gosh!!! This is sooo good! I give you two thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: Miyuki On: February 21, 2003 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
um, u know, Iron Reaver Soul Stealer is actually, Sankon Tessou... in japanese. it sounds better and Iron Reaver Soul Stealer is kinda lame... so i hope you use Sankon Tessou in the future. And also, Kazanna is Miroku's Wind Tunnel... and Kirara is actually the real name of Kilala. It's prnounced Kirara not Ki lala. |
Reviewed By: Miyuki On: February 21, 2003 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
um, u know, Iron Reaver Soul Stealer is actually, Sankon Tessou... in japanese. it sounds better and Iron Reaver Soul Stealer is kinda lame... so i hope you use Sankon Tessou in the future. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! Good chapter!!! =D
I wonder what Kagome wished for? I guess I'll just have to wait and see...and Sesshoumaru suddenly seems...not evil? O_o; Odd...
Can't wait 'til you update and give me some answers!! ^_^ Ai Shiteru!!! =D
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 07, 2003 14:20 CST
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How old is Rin? If she is 18...^_^ we'll just get see Sessoumaru get mushy! And how is Inuyasha going to learn enough to live in the present day world in such a short time? |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
WEE!!!! =D I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
It's definately my most favorite InuYasha story, and it's sooooo spiffy!!! ^_^ I loved everything about it!! I just can't wait until you update it!!! ^_^
AI SHITERU!!!! ^_^ *beams and clings to*
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 04, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Break out the whoop ass and puntane! Especially the puntane!
*Sorry but I have to agree with Eastsidegeorgiaboy (the reviewer above me) the english names suck ass, use the original ones please. |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue please? |
Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate the english translations of this show. Iron revere soul stealer is the gayest attack since wind tunnel. Hybrid? whats up with that. It wouldve been better if you just use the original names. |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 09, 2003 20:24 CST
Comment/Review:
What's the Wish? Tell me! Update! |
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