| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Klopez717 On: July 09, 2003 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter eight of "This mess we're in" was really good and i enjoyed it greatly. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, chapter 9 is absolutely *the* longest fanfiction chapter I have *ever* read...and I've read a lot of fanfics in the last 3 years (^_^) But, not just the length...the content...it was excellent. I can't even write an entire fic that long without making it seem empty hehe I started this fic...I guess a few hours ago (^.^) Went straight through it, enjoying it very much. The serious moments are very well written, and the comedic moments...well, I've laughed out loud at several of the things you've written. |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 17:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
please write more soon |
Reviewed By: ayumi-chan On: July 08, 2003 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my fave stories! I really love it! Update soon! I just love Sesshie and Kag fics...I'm a sucker for Fluffy *he's so much better looking and smarter than Inuyasha (but I still like him too)* and this one is one of the best I've read so far. I look foward to reading what's next. |
Reviewed By: Draco On: July 08, 2003 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*DIES!* You're alive! I started this on ff.net, but I found mediaminer to be more reliable to look for updates. ^^ I was following your fanfic, but waiting for this chapter took /sooo/ long! I thought you'd forgotten or weren't going to finish it *SOB* It actually took me hours to read the new chapter, and I absolutely LOVED it! Now I'm jus' going to have to hunt you down for you to update the rest! >P Please, work hard and post soon, an' don' make your fans wait months or so for the next chapter to come out! You left us off like that, too, an' I'm dying to know what happens! More! More! Your fans will stalk you, tie you down to the computer, an' force you to write. ^-~ Keep up the good work, and please don' give up!
Ja ne
_D |
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this story! I've been waiting since I don't know how long for you to update! I'm not angry, though. I think the wait was worth it! Keep it up, this story is great! |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: July 07, 2003 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God you're funny. I burst out laughing periodically. I'm so glad you've updated.now just keep it coming. This is a verrry long chapter, which is good since you haven't updated in like forever! |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 06:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for the nice long chapter. I truly enjoyed the humor between Kagome and Sesshoumaru-loved the bunny slippers.
I love Aya and her family but that mass of Youkai heading thier way doesn't bode well for them.
I've enjoyed the flash between the future and the past. I really like the way you are writing this story and hope you update soon.
I feel sorta bad for Inuyasha but I really like the relationship between Sess and Kagome.
What becomes of Rin when Sess reincarnates or whatever in the future? |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really hope u get a hell of a lot more reviews for this chapter!!! I mean shit it was long...Believe me that was definitely a good thing...But it wasn't fair!!! Kagome and Sessy had the perfect chance to have a total juicy lemony moment and she pulled back...I bet u can imagine me crying...Okay anyways I love this story!!! I mean the chapters are long and the next chapter should be in the present time which is even better!!! Yay! I hope she wasn't raped in the uhh old era thingie...Yea. Okay anyways in since I swallowed way too much salt water at the beach and my face is as red as a tomatoe I think I'll shut up now...O yea learning to surf is really hard for me...Yea okay I'll shut-up this time...Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 01:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't gotten through all of the chapters yet, but I am hooked! Please, please keep it up---I love the dual time line. Hanging on the edge of my seat here, desperately waiting for the next plot development. |
Reviewed By: Saria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have NEVER read a fanfic that has songs for the chapters. I wish I could do that. Cool. |
Reviewed By: Katzztar On: July 05, 2003 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh I'm loving this story! The scenes with Jaken & Rin are tooo cute! |
Reviewed By: river On: July 05, 2003 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank-you for the chapter, I've been waiting!!! I love the humor, and the story is intriguing!!! Looking forward to the next chapter, it can't come soon enough! |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 05, 2003 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. your really talented writer. it's so cool that the chapter are long. and are very interesting. keep updating. and keep on trucking. it just get more interesting to read. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 05, 2003 17:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oooohhhh! UPDATE! Or you will surely have hell to pay for. ^^; Heh. |
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