| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicoius (not logged in) On: March 15, 2005 17:49 EST
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Ahh, me again. *sheepish grin* I just realized that I was incorrect about the whole "notch/nock" thing; either is appropriate. Just thought I'd clear that up and apologize. Sorry.
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Reviewed By: Somnambulicious (not signed in) On: March 15, 2005 03:58 EST
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Ah, I had forgotten how much I enjoyed this fic! It was one of the first IY fanfics I ever read, and in the year or so since I first read it, my tastes have grown more discriminating, but you still manage to impress the hell out of me. The humor, the fight scenes, the lemons, the dialogue, the angst...everything is just spot on. I picked up on a grammatical or spelling error here and there, and just a couple of other errors (a person doesn't "notch" an arrow, she "nocks" it,) but all in all, your fic is a shining example of what fanfiction should be like. Looking back over it, I can see exactly how much your story has influenced my own, even to the point that I've apparently (and unintentionally) borrowed a few phrases here and there. *sheepish grin* I guess I'll have to go fix that. Anyway, I understand that you've got some real-world problems that keep you from updating, and I wish you the best of luck with that. However, even if you never updated again (which I sincerely hope doesn't happen,) this would still be one of the best IY fanfics ever written. For making me laugh out loud, I thank you. :)
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Reviewed By: Spikerix On: March 04, 2005 14:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great story this is, it took me a couple of days but once I began I couldn't stop reading! It's too bad about your hand that you couldn't write anymore, but that was a year ago, are you still hurting? Or you're not planning on updating anytime soon? Because if that's the case then you should do as many authors that dropped their stories, they put "no longer updated" on their fic status or better, beside the story's title. That would save a lot of reading time to the people who don't want to wait indefinitely for seeing a plot developed and finished, like me. At least that would show a little respect and consideration to the ones that ARE waiting, don't you think? Anyway, I will say what all hundred and plus reviews are, hope not futily, asking: PLEASE UPDATE!!! Kisses from Argentina
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 09:48 EST
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UPDATE
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Reviewed By: leysha On: November 24, 2004 11:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this fic. it has everything that i love. i hope you are going to update real soon cause i've been waiting for the update since like may.
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Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really beautiful fanfic. i love that you have two stories in one. and most of all i love that it is a kagome and Sesshomaru fanfiction. please can you write some more i know it is hard to wirte this stroy because it's to in one but i would really like it if you could. this is a very kawaii story. Domo arigato
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Reviewed By: FeFe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 16:20 EST
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This is and always will be one of my favorite Kagome/Seshomaru fanfics. Whenever, and if ever, you feel like adding another chapter, you will always have people eager to read it.
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Title: This Mess We're In
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 14, 2004 15:50 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: jc On: September 13, 2004 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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update update please?!! *does puppy face* people run away... err maybe not... well, i believe it has a promising plot and the senarios the future kagome and sesshoumaru have are soo funny! so please please, pretty please with sugar on top update a nice longggg chapter?
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Title: Update!!!
Reviewed By: Holy Cat On: August 16, 2004 19:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pokes you* Update! Update!!! *Hits over Head* UPDATE!!!!!!!! I really like your story so please! Update! Don't make me have to get violent! Update!!!
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Title: Quirkyslayer
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 03:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm totally hooked to this fan fic! I love the way you bring so much humor and levity to the conversations, even though there's serious stuff going on here. And I'm even more impressed that you bring so much comedy to Kagome and Sesshoumaru and still keep them in character. There are so many moments that left me rolling on the floor with laughter. Besides that, I finished this thing at 245 am. Shame on you for keeping me up past my bedtime. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 04:39 EDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Title: REmember- dead girls are cool...
Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic- Kikyo-sama is in it (YAY!) and she is not being bashed! (Yay, again!) *tears of joy* I'm so happy...
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Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 18:36 EDT
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Yep, me again. Just wondering when you'll continue the story. I've been waiting almost two months for the update, but NOTHING. Your story is the first fan fic story I really enjoy the most. Sometime I would re-read it over several times. It's amazing. Hopefully you'll update soon. I'm patient, but not that patient. Plus, a story like yours screams-Read Me!! Can't wait to read more. Update real real real soon!!!
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Title: Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've kept me up until nearly 2am on a work night, reading your wonderful tale. Love the complex characterization, the lovely attention to detail, and the faithful depiction of characters. You've told a great story, and I can't wait to see how it all wraps up with Kagome's reunion with her Mama. Fabulous Inuyasha novel !!*clap*clap*clap*
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