| "The Great Scam" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: jago On: June 25, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I alway thought that sonic and rouge should be a couple. And I still do. They both do things they want to do. They both tough fighters and they both live life the that they want. Its kinda like the song I heard called [Do What You Want To Do]. Anyway pleeeeeeeeeease make this story into a rouge and sonic lemon. Where rouge admits that she loves sonic and she wants him bad and they make love and have sex and she totally forgets about knuckles that stupid bitch ass muthafucka, and she is very happy that sonic is her lover. From now on. And please please pleeeease it very very very very sooon. |
Reviewed By: kazuya On: June 23, 2003 23:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pleaes please man add more to this sonic and rouge story and please I'm beggin ya please make rouge and sonic be lovers in the next chapter PLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEE. |
Reviewed By: jago On: June 23, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should make more sonic and rouge stories. I like sonic and rouge pairings. And please make alot of sonic and rouge lemon fics.
Besides I like sonic and rouge being lovers. And like you wrote in the fic The Great Scam rouge fell in love with sonic and he fell in love with rouge please make a sonic and rouge lemon thank you and please do it very very very very very very soon as possible thank you man. |
Reviewed By: Yramesor Notfarc(correction) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? Overall, I enjoyed it. |
Reviewed By: omega On: June 04, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is exelent please please pleaseeeee write more |
Reviewed By: ruben On: April 15, 2003 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want to read more of those story's WRITE MORE please |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 On: April 03, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! Its a PERFERCT Story!! Its funny, romantic, and serious! Add more to the stoyr!! I want to see what happens next!! PLEASE!!!! I've never read something as good as this!! Sonic and Rouge! What a pairing! Please continue this story!! Knickles is a freak! I hope Sonic tortures his carcass to death!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: March 23, 2003 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever posted your writing on greyarchive? I think I read some before. But anyway what's up with this story? I mean it's great but there is'nt any hentai in it. (snickers Heh heh chop sticks heh) I mean there's only one mention of sex. But please continue writing. |
Reviewed By: SpikeX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 06:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic ive ever read! you need to keep going, your doing a great job!!!!! |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat On: March 05, 2003 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
this is by far the best fan fiction i've ever read.
i would like to see more. this fanfic really made me smile
(orckids!!!) but there was one thing that ruined this
fic YOU NEED MORE as in you gotta finish this, waiting for the
final chapters are driving me nuts!!! this is the best
thing i've ever read. in the ending chapters more cute scenes
would really put the good back into g'day. i don't know what to say.
this is writing with oomph, writing with pow, wrighting with
well to put it lightly what a story should be.
you should enter this into a contest. this was so
good i just sat and read it for hours. then when i was done i read it again.
i wish i diddnt ever read this so i would have the pleasure
or reading this all over again.this is the kind of writing oprah
sohuld be bitching about(yes that was intended as a complement)
if she read this or "my NiGHT with you" her lard saturated head would explode
i know my head exploaded! i loved the part about the tree(man is she stacked)
i nearly bit my pillow in 2 with the bathroom (used goods I'M GONNA KILL HIM)
or how about rouges outfit was it like the outfit mina the mongoose
wore on the first page of sonic the hedgehog issue # 120
if they would make this a comic there would
be riots in the streets. people trampling other people
just to get their grubby little hands on this peice of literary GOLD
they would loot the stores/ wait overnight/ hijak delivery trucks/
run jump climb just to be in the same room with this great fan fic
i am so glad i was so privilaged to read this. but it lacks bunnie.
no great loos i guess. if i could i would give it a 1000000000000000000000
and that's just the way i feel about this and once again sorry bout my life with you |
Reviewed By: rouge the bat On: March 05, 2003 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
this is by far the best fan fiction i've ever read.
i would like to see more. this fanfic really made me smile
(orckids!!!) but there was one thing that ruined this
fic YOU NEED MORE as in you gotta finish this, waiting for the
final chapters are driving me nuts!!! this is the best
thing i've ever read. in the ending chapters more cute scenes
would really put the good back into g'day. i don't know what to say.
this is writing with oomph, writing with pow, wrighting with
well to put it lightly what a story should be.
you should enter this into a contest. this was so
good i just sat and read it for hours. then when i was done i read it again.
i wish i diddnt ever read this so i would have the pleasure
or reading this all over again.this is the kind of writing oprah
sohuld be bitching about(yes that was intended as a complement)
if she read this or "my NiGHT with you" her lard saturated head would explode
i know my head exploaded! i loved the part about the tree(man is she stacked)
i nearly bit my pillow in 2 with the bathroom (used goods I'M GONNA KILL HIM)
or how about rouges outfit was it like the outfit mina the mongoose
wore on the first page of sonic the hedgehog issue # 120
if they would make this a comic there would
be riots in the streets. people trampling other people
just to get their grubby little hands on this peice of literary GOLD
they would loot the stores/ wait overnight/ hijak delivery trucks/
run jump climb just to be in the same room with this great fan fic
i am so glad i was so privilaged to read this. but it lacks bunnie.
no great loos i guess. if i could i would give it a 1000000000000000000000
and that's just the way i feel about this and once again sorry bout my life with you |
Reviewed By: captin punch On: March 02, 2003 14:10 CST
Comment/Review:
also if they made a movie "my night with you" i
would still be at the theater with my hand in someone
elses popcorn! joke I"m just kidding. but i thing the
new skinnysonic needs to eat something and swallow
hell it sounds like sally and amy did(he he get
blow, swallow,sally's inquenchable libido, awwww)
i'm not gonna flame sally because she's still cool
even after the geffroy st. john incident(massage, fanfic)
any how i still thought there was a lack of bunnie.
however you can't get enough of rouge the bat.if anyone
disaggres tell me why on this board. though so hot shot.
just make knuckles the bastard have a horrible day.
I"M STILL GONNA KILL HIM! I"M GONNA MELT HIM ALIVE!
ooh ooh ooh have tails and amy together. that would be gewd( i
spell it gewd because it was a joke from the grim adventures
of billy and mandy. billy spelled it gewd and that
aws the funniest moment on the show) anyways i love how you describe
my little rouge. but you forgot earrings. great jorb
jerorbe. job, by theway this is a 9.998 keep up the good work
and keep a bad echidna down >^^ |
Reviewed By: captin punch On: March 02, 2003 14:10 CST
Comment/Review:
also if they made a movie "my night with you" i
would still be at the theater with my hand in someone
elses popcorn! joke I"m just kidding. but i thing the
new skinnysonic needs to eat something and swallow
hell it sounds like sally and amy did(he he get
blow, swallow,sally's inquenchable libido, awwww)
i'm not gonna flame sally because she's still cool
even after the geffroy st. john incident(massage, fanfic)
any how i still thought there was a lack of bunnie.
however you can't get enough of rouge the bat.if anyone
disaggres tell me why on this board. though so hot shot.
just make knuckles the bastard have a horrible day.
I"M STILL GONNA KILL HIM! I"M GONNA MELT HIM ALIVE!
ooh ooh ooh have tails and amy together. that would be gewd( i
spell it gewd because it was a joke from the grim adventures
of billy and mandy. billy spelled it gewd and that
aws the funniest moment on the show) anyways i love how you describe
my little rouge. but you forgot earrings. great jorb
jerorbe. job, by theway this is a 9.998 keep up the good work
and keep a bad echidna down >^^ |
Reviewed By: captin punch On: March 02, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! this was so kawaii i nearly
died! and everyone knows boys bont talk
like that often. i love rouge the bat
and as of now i hate knuckles the bastard.
i was playing with him and in a fit of rage melted
him at the red mountian lava pits.
"used goods" I SWEAR I"M GONNA KILL HIM.no noe can
talk about my little rougelike that.
just whatever you do don't let it end
like that "my life with you" fiasco. my night
with you was very gewd(tails has sallys undies!!!!
i read it last month and i still laugh whenever i
see either of them) and i know shes not but if you were
reffering to ROBO-BITCH wouldent that be a
false statement about bunnie?anyways i just got issue #120
and i'm overjoyed that knuckled the bastard is dead. i
hope it was painful. but not for julie su. i liked
her before this fanfic and i still do and i hate seeind
her sad which she is. |
Reviewed By: captin punch On: March 02, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! this was so kawaii i nearly
died! and everyone knows boys bont talk
like that often. i love rouge the bat
and as of now i hate knuckles the bastard.
i was playing with him and in a fit of rage melted
him at the red mountian lava pits.
"used goods" I SWEAR I"M GONNA KILL HIM.no noe can
talk about my little rougelike that.
just whatever you do don't let it end
like that "my life with you" fiasco. my night
with you was very gewd(tails has sallys undies!!!!
i read it last month and i still laugh whenever i
see either of them) and i know shes not but if you were
reffering to ROBO-BITCH wouldent that be a
false statement about bunnie?anyways i just got issue #120
and i'm overjoyed that knuckled the bastard is dead. i
hope it was painful. but not for julie su. i liked
her before this fanfic and i still do and i hate seeind
her sad which she is. |
Reviewed By: reviewer man On: February 15, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story man good pairing to update soon |
Reviewed By: Bakura2689 On: February 08, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! This is the best! |
Reviewed By: Valonsergki On: February 09, 2003 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Great so far! Keep going man! |
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