| "Not Meant for Me" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: susieray On: July 24, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story. If you have ever read Elfquest, it reminds me of Cutter having to wait for Leetah after Rayek kidnapped her. If you haven't ever read Elfquest, start now, Inu Yasha reminds me a lot of Cutter. Anyway I did enjoy your story and hope to read more from you. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL nice ending. Shes like I'm going to not say that word sit anymore and then he goes into the ground. That was good, very nice ending. Anyways my bro wants to get on the comp so I gotta leave this review simple and short. Bye~ |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you!
Your writing has improved so much since you first started! I'm still kinda partial to your Ember/Maxxine/Goku lemon ~_^, let me know if you ever come across it. I loved this fic, and I love IY! I could totally picture Inu- in those black pants **drools**, I love the bit at the end too, the sit part.
Queen of the Damned cd is the shiznit too, I got that one! Peace!
~EM |
Reviewed By: zero On: May 24, 2003 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fanfic |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! That was so cute! I support Kagome/Inu Yasha 100% I HATE Kikyo soooooo much! |
Reviewed By: Nanshi On: February 21, 2003 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great Fanfic!!! It was sad and so roamntic. Enjoyment Factor: 100% |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it...it was really great....it is nice to see one shot lemons still going stong these days..id make the enjoyment factor higher if i could...lalalalalalalala |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 12:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww that was sweet! I like the idea of Inuyasha using the jewel to stay alive long enough to see Kagome again... I hope you write more one-shots like this! |
Reviewed By: JenTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
KAWAIII!!!^-^ love the ending, the sex well evrything lol....U can make a sequel to this(PWEASE*puppy eyes*) I wish my hubby could wait 500 years for me *sigh* oh well lol CONGRATS again cool fic |
Reviewed By: kili087 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i haven't seen many of these around. I defintly liked the whole thing. *smiles* please make a sequel to this |
Reviewed By: KasandaraYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Some of the grammar was off but it didn't distract to much. My suggestion would be to get a beta reader to catch all the mistakes you miss ^^. Anywho please write more Inuyasha Fanfiction you're really good at it... |
Reviewed By: CreativeJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT fic! ( There's not much more I can say, ya know?!) |
Reviewed By: Twinky_Land [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SEXUALLY AMAZING! |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 09, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome is into the whole older man thing^_^ almost 600 years old... make a sequal! Ok, so then it wouldn't be a one shot, but still! make a sequal, it was great! |
Reviewed By: KiiKii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a really well-done story! I have read a couple of stories with this sort of plot, but I'd have to say yours was really great! Keep writing great stories like this!
~* LiMeAwAyGiRl~* |
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