| "Birthday Boy" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Arghh... I'm turning gay because of you...
Reviewed By: Candle Collector On: September 02, 2005 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! You used what I call 'word power'. It's really damn sexy, using those bunch of very, very, good words you've used. God! I can't believe I read a yaoi hentai fic... Great Job! One of the greatest hentai fics I've ever read, and erm... the first yaoi fic I've ever read. You should feel honored
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Reviewed By: Li On: June 29, 2005 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG u so rock!!!! That was so hot!!!! i luv your writing style keep it up cause we know Daisuke & Ken will! :p Li
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Reviewed By: WilliDrairAngel On: August 22, 2003 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEEEEEEEEE!!!!! Happy happy lemon-ness! n_n That was great! The only Digimon pairing I really liked was TaichixYamoto, but thanks to this fic, I think it's safe to say I'm now officially obsessed with DaisukexKen. Write more! n_n |
Reviewed By: Page of Wands [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word: HOT. HOOOOOOOOOOOT!!! That was eeeeexcellent ^^ I really liked how you wrote that, it flowed so smoothly and perfectly XD A real pleasure to read! ^o^ lol
You're writing style is so good!!! *envyenvy* You just make everything fit so perfectly. =D Daisuke was so cute in this ^_~ And, Ken, so fabulously seductive.......Mmmmmmmmm............. For enjoyment factor, they should definitely have a higher rating than 10............like 10 *thousand* or something........^o^ This earns it~~!!! *drools* |
Reviewed By: Alex Yoshizaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, for sexyness, you get an A. However, the plot was extrememly implausible. I mean, you'd think that Ken's voice, build, movement, hair (hair and glasses combo, no less!) would maybe tip Daisuke off to his identity. There's only so much that backlighting can do.
Not to mention the character interaction. *Why* was Daisuke not disturbed that he'd just unknowingly screwed his best friend? Why was Ken not disturbed that Daisuke would screw some dancer he didn't even know?
It's these sorts of things that nag at me while I'm reading. |
Reviewed By: kai On: February 09, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot daiken-ness ~_~ *drools over imaginary ken as a dancer* |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Ichijouji On: February 10, 2003 08:14 CST
Comment/Review:
WOOHOO YOU GO KEN gr8 story!~ |
Reviewed By: Ken_Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic, I hope your gonna decide to wright a sequel to this one. You have to, you just have to! PLEASE? |
Reviewed By: Ken_Ichijouji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Ow and before I forget, I know it supose to be a one shot fic, but well people can dream about a sequel without getting one, right?
But I hope there will be many more story's like this one, carry on!! |
Reviewed By: =^_^= On: February 10, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love you love you love you .. !! i never get tired of your fics |
Reviewed By: Morphia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 07:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God!
This story deserves MORE than 10, but that's all there is...
Perfect!
The way Daisuke didn't know it was Ken until the very last paragraph... The whole sexiness of it all...
You're talented *-*
*sneeze* Ack, I'm so sick now.. The best time to read lemons- when you're dizzy ^^;;;
Well, better get going now, Jaa!
*runs off* |
Reviewed By: Star_female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow *-* That was really really good! I loved it! Keep writing those amazing fics of yours *-* |
Reviewed By: jkb On: February 12, 2003 08:03 CST
Comment/Review:
I so totally need a cigarette after reading that...
jkb |
Reviewed By: Bomber Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Whooo! *grins* Soooo good. More? Onegai? |
Reviewed By: sailorcelestia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very good. keep writing! |
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