| "Tin Soldiers" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Duke of Earl... just kidding. On: April 13, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this SO much! You're REALLY good at writing, and are super at portraying the Gundam characters. It's people like you who remind me how much I stink at writing, and that I should just leave my talents in art. Not a bad thing, but anyway... Does it really take an entire week to think of this stuff, or are you only allowed on the internet on Saturdays? I was just wondering, because I can never wait long enough for the next chapter of this to come out. Never give up on this one! It's great! |
Reviewed By: Calamity On: April 11, 2003 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great fic!!! I hope Duo will show Heero that he is not too impressed by him! I'm so sick of all these fic I read where poor Duo is begging Heero to love him and to forgive him for who he is!
I love Duo's humor (I laughed my ass of when Duo was tempted on smashing the window to escape his so boooring reunion - remember mines.... *sweatdrops*)
Well I love it, please update soon *begging with puppy shiny chibi eyes, irresistible* lol
keep going!
Cal (again ^^ I write you about fake last year)
ps : I love prince and soldiers too |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 10, 2003 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is excellent! I love your characterization and tone -- very well-done. Duo's voice is flawless. He sounds mature and yet mischievous, which is very true to his character. Heero's a block of ice, as usual, but the way you write him makes him extra sex-ayyy. Mmmm. I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
Very nice job, Kracken-sama. Your fics have sucked me into their world once again. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: April 10, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHHHmmmm,...another intresting new chapter,...and heero is still an asshole,...why is he bein a jerk towards duo??...heero is my fav character in gundam,...and will always be,..but in this fic,...he's a TOTAL JERK and an ICE,COLD BASTARD to boot,...WHY??...why did ya make him like that in here??...*pout*...it's piss-me-off he's bein like that in here,...BUT i still love him,...[and of course heero in a suit looks VERY handsome Nee??,..*wink,wink*]...poor duo,...continue soon kay,...and keep-up the good work,...till yer-next chapter,..Jaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGaaaanbbbaaaattteeeeee-Neeeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: Bzratcat On: April 10, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, Can't wait to see how this unravels. Waiting for more. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love Duo's commentary, it's really OC and very well done. When will Trowa and WuFei enter the fic? Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Lura On: April 10, 2003 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!!!!!!!! More soon please:) |
Reviewed By: Noi On: April 10, 2003 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
*drools all over kracken* i'm in love with ur writing! i'm not even a 1x2 fan but this leaves me wanting more :] especially like how it's from Duo's pov. |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChicir On: April 10, 2003 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Once again, a baffled Duo. Hehe. You're doing a great job Kracken! |
Reviewed By: Lura On: April 09, 2003 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!!!!!!!!! I love it! Update soon :) |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 11:08 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a good one. I love how you've done Duo'd point of view. The scolding, congratulatiing, wondering.. its all done really well and realisticly. PLus the 3D vid is a great touch! That is hilarious.
Before I forget I should also mention the personalities you've given the characters so far. So much different than the "regular" fanfic personalities and I'm loving it. I think you hit it dead on the button. They just seem so real and you can imagine the personalities as being the ones the characters would have had as young adults instead of teens.
Just overall a really good job and I cant wait for the next installment!
- Storm |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: March 31, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oi! Very entertaining story :) But when are you putting those to tooggeetthheerrrr....!! Ah well, put out the next one soon!! |
Reviewed By: Night On: March 31, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's great: a new story from you!!! I'M SO HAPPY... I'm waiting for more! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Duo, he's got a hard on and Heero is acting really vicious toward him. So what's up w/ Relena? Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jenn On: March 20, 2003 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe.... This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAVE to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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