Title: Update, please! I WANT MORE!
Reviewed By: The Great Super Saiyan 5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! Nice idea to have Lucca fall in love with Crono, too... hope she gets him- Crono/Marle fics are probably pretty common, and I also wanna see Lucca's 'dream-come-true,' so to speak. I don't exactly like that royal ditz, anyway... but if you have to give her a replacement, I'd recommend giving her a secret crush on Magus. Don't exactly like seeing my fave character alone, y'know... I HATE YAOI! NO FROG/MAGUS! *ahem* Sorry about that. Frog may be a pretty cool character- he's in my fave character combo, along with Crono and (of course) Magus- but I don't think he should get together with any other characters without being cured first... ESPECIALLY not Crono or Magus. (too bad the female characters in the game suck... wouldn't be a surprise if they literally suck) I would also recommend that you leave Robo alone... that would approximate masturbation, in my opinion. By the way, back to the subject of Magus/whoever pairings, if you ever want to do a Magus NON-YAOI lemon, I'm all for it! I wouldn't even mind a Magus/Schala lemon (I've seen that on another fanfic site... not sure which one), but it'd be nice if it was a Magus/OC fic. I don't mind yuri as much as yaoi, but I still prefer Het fics. Hey... I just got an idea... a CT/DBZ/DBGT lemon with Magus getting together with, say, 18 (with 18 dumping shorty, aka Krillen, if she goes for Magus), Crono going for Lucca (for variety- as I said earlier, probably lots of Crono/Marle lemons), and Bulma curing Frog's frog curse (redundant wording, right?) and Glenn eventually getting together with someone (don't care who, as long as it's female). For Marle... how 'bout Goten? Also, I'm a Tr/Pan supporter, so that could be one of the few single-series romances in the fic... Hope I gave you ideas for other fics! Anyway, update ASAP, OK? I'm not sure what 'ja ne' means, and I don't care, so I'll just say this: Keep up the good work! I like the occasional odd het pairing (Crono/Lucca, for example- who'd expect THEM to get together? You'd think he'd go for Marle, considering the characters' in-game reactions... I'd really be surprised if Crono went for Ayla, but that might end up being a nice fic, if it's well-written... like so many other concepts. All too often I see fics with great ideas decimated by poor writing. That sucks! This world needs more good fanfic writers!). (BTW, main reason I joined was to review, but I might submit a fic or two eventually- if I do, be as harsh as you want! After all, criticism lets me know what I'm doing wrong! But no flames if I submit, at least tell me what's wrong with my fics so I can improve... OK? Also, I know I probably can't do lemons worth shit, but THAT AIN'T GONNA STOP ME FROM TRYING, DAMMIT!) Anyway... later! MAGUS NEEDS A GIRLFRIEND! GIVE HIM A DAMN GIRLFRIEND! (that's my CT lemon battlecry, or whatever you wanna call it)
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