| "Princeling" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anatra DeSylvianno On: September 01, 2005 09:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't forgotten about us (the readers so utterly delighted with this fic - and all your others-), have you!? I'd love to see how Videl makes out getting the brats to bed, and if Sage finally calms down or if his papas are forced to return to take care of their little prince! Gohan seems to have his hands full, but the way you write him as so caring of his family is absolutely fantastic. This is a gorgeous piece of writing as usual and it would be an absolute shame to leave it unfinished! Please write more!!! ~Anatra
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Title: Wild Melody
Reviewed By: Wild Melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading your fics 'Birth of a Prince' and 'Princeling' and think that both are great. i just have a few questions though, are Goku and Vegeta ever going to have a kid together? how do Gohan and Videl get together? i am curious, what is the address for A Prince and his Boy website? Wild Melody - Windsong_Melody@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: fireice [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more. I love all your sage stories and you're an excelent writer. please continue
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Reviewed By: Kaialicious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
“NO NO HIGHCHAIW!!!!”
AAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA!!! ^______^ *pounds fists on desk and falls out of chair laughing*
OMG...Sage is a chibi demon. I would never want to babysit him or his evil litle brothers. *bows to Talon Sage* In the words of Sage, "More, more, more!" ^____^ |
Reviewed By: Purple Mist On: June 20, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please write more!! 'Mine Gohan!' I love that! Sage is soo cute! This is a greate sequal so far and I can't wait to read more. I'm glad you're here so I can post reviews and say how much I love your work! |
Reviewed By: dreamer On: April 18, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more story. Please update soon. You haven't forgotten about your loyal readers have you? In sages words "More fic" |
Reviewed By: KAI2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your stories about Sage, I hope you continue writing a/u w/him and his relationship w/ Gohan. |
Reviewed By: Myself On: April 01, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
More More More! What happens to Videl?! |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 23:56 CST
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*smirks* If you want an AU where Sage controls the relationship with Gohan, please spork my twin, Cleodasia for her Reflections of a Prince.
*smirksmirksmirk*
And that's all I'm sayin' bout that!!!
Talon |
Reviewed By: phoenix1 On: March 31, 2003 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read most of your Sage fics. I was a bit leary at first about these because the one I started on was one where there was a lot of Sage angst. At that time I was a bit wary of such things. I'm still leary of your Restraint & Liberations fic. But the others are good. Chibi Sage is so cute. But then so are many baby carnivores so I'll keep my distance. Something I think would be real cute is if in a sort of a/u that Sage controlled the relationship with Gohan. And stole him away from Videl. But this fic is really good. I'm rambling so I'll stop. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: likeacat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I look forward to every word you write - I don't like kids, but Chibi Sage is special. Gohan acting all grown-up and responsible - I'm trying to picture him with his Kakarott face....I actually feel sorry for Videl - I kind of like her on DBZ, but in Sage's world she does need slapping on a regular basis. I just know Truten are going to be horrible to her, the brats (just like they are someday going to be awful to Yamcha at the zoo....) I'm also looking forward to more Vegeta/Goku interaction (not just hot monkey sex - but that's good too). I like them together as parents. Vegeta as a good father...well you leave me in awe. MORE! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have allways liked your fanfics and they are so orignal and so forth keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Princess Emeraude On: March 24, 2003 17:04 CST
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LOL Boy that Videl is a wimp! ROFL There are SO many more gross things out there than that! *chuckle*
*tiny Neko Sage giggles and rolls into a kawaii ball of giggleing fluff*
Great new Chapter! I always did wonder what demi-sayians would eat. Keep up the great work! *smile* |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 02, 2003 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course we want you to continue...Personally i have fallen in love with sage and will soon kidnap him. But if I do, I think all of his parents will be very mad at me...so...after a moments consideration, have decided just to keep reviewing and read more excellent work of yours. |
Reviewed By: Sakiku On: March 01, 2003 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! Finally the sequel!
and dont you DARE to discontinue this great story!!!!!!!!
there would be hell to pay ... and don't forget it, I've been there
Well, enough with the threats, but we are all waiting for the next chapter! |
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