| "The 6th Gundam Pilot?" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alero On: March 19, 2004 23:40 CST
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HI! yay, another chapter! Panqueque, you need to chill out....people do have lives. Yay now that thats over, my review..... School would be like that I'd have to admit even though I think Quatra would be mad fun of, but I really don't like Quatra. Well, you were right about the fuzz/mush....it was great ^-^ hurrah for fuzzy scenes....take your time on the chapters make them nice and long!!!! 10/10-DUH!
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Reviewed By: Panqueque On: March 19, 2004 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seriously ned to get a chapter up, I haven't looked for a month and ones still not up.......
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Reviewed By: Alero On: February 17, 2004 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! i'm back again..sorry that i haven't reviewed lately. Hurrah the next chapter1 can't wait till the next one! oh yeah, lets see....you write very well, keep writing, you can easily keep me amused, and i like how you portray all the characters in this fic..KEEP WRITING
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Reviewed By: Tsuyoku On: January 15, 2004 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, don't stop, this is getting better every chapter! It's a good story and I never would've thought of the matching quite like that... Complements.
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Title: KEEP WRITING
Reviewed By: Alero On: December 23, 2003 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic its so good, you need to get the next chapter up, so help me god you better not have quit on this story!!!!!!!!please keep writing!!!!!!!!
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Title: Please update!!!
Reviewed By: Hipcue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fict. It's a really good idea how you put Wufei and Talia together. Can't wait till you update your story.
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Reviewed By: Alero On: October 08, 2003 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me again! I'm sooooooo happy you got the next chapter up!! I've been waiting for it. You're writing is soooo good, way more better than a lot of people..I agree with what everyone says! YOu need to keep writing because i'm sucked into this story now. I need an ending!!! YOu need to keep this stroy up *pleads* keep writing!!!!!!!! (P.S. duh i'll give you 10/10 on everything......)
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Reviewed By: Alero On: August 23, 2003 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keept he chapters looooong. i like them so you don't have to be constantly clicking and loading (my computer is verrrry slow) i love this fan fic!!!!!! It's so good!!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Alero On: August 22, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 22:55 CDT
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sorry i haven't reviewed til now but i just discovered this story.... which is incredible by the way! I have discovered in recent times that i like Wu-chan and love stories that give more of his softer side. i love your char Talia, she just so great! Mischevious like Duo, but also with a spunk thats all her own! I can relate to the 4:30 typing thing cause i've done it, and i like the Dilandau referance! Did u find a beta yet? If not I'll be happy to help if u really need it. I love how u bring Wufei's char to life! (rapid subject change ....) I can see him acting like that. They are fairly conservative in traditional China and its totally awsome how u make him kind of innocent and not much for the public shows of affection. Its so cute how he blushes when she hugs him! I can just see it! And the puppy! that was great, and the teddy.... and .... and, well, i just with i had found this fic earlier cause then this would have been spead into several revies=ws instead of one where i try to talk about all the tennis ball like thoughts bouncing around in my head......... and ,WOW! *looks at what she has already written* thats kinda long...@.@ *blushes* penchent for babbling is bad! note to self, fix it soon and hide the straight jacket....... So! heh...heh? i really like the story and i can't wait for more! its cavity inducing fluffiness sometimes and very dramitic others, a really good mix! Don't be suprised if u get reviews for other stories by me, i only review for people with potential. others just get very sweet critiques, and that sounded kinda mean... wheres that delete button, i didn't mean it so sound that way. and damn! i seem to have lost it. oh well.I hope to see how the get out of the capture sit and i kno it was zechs that bought her. and sent the message to the g-boys. i also hope for more fluff b/w the main chars. i liked the visuals i got of wufei through this too. yumyumeatumup!*lickes lips* and, I'm going to shut up now. *sheepish look*i babble alot... well, happy writing! Ja ne! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: cmdeegan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 11:47 CDT
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I like this. Dont stop the book or whatever u call this... fan fic. |
Reviewed By: Chris On: June 07, 2003 21:00 CDT
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This is great. You shouldn't quit. I'll check everyday for a new one. But i wish the girl was more... romanticly involved. And the one thing i dont like is that all the gundam pilots are like... gay |
Reviewed By: MLG On: March 05, 2003 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic . It is so BRILLIANT please write a new chaper soon. PLEASE don't stop just because some insecure people are imbarised about there opinions. |
Reviewed By: MLG On: March 05, 2003 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic . It is so BRILLIANT please write a new chaper soon. PLEASE don't stop just because some insecure people are imbarised about there opinions. |
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell & Rhea Maxwell On: February 21, 2003 18:17 CST
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Riley: OOOhhhh. Spicy romances I like. Write more I enjoyed this story a lot. |
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