"Voices at Midnight" Reviews/Comments [ 162 ] |
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Reviewed By: moomoo On: February 27, 2003 22:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ahh!!! you can't end it there!! but i bet i noe who it was. u r so evil!! wah!!! i wanted to see what was going to happen!! Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 21:44 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: School started again for me today and I got an ulcer just reading the welcome page! I don't know if I can post new chapters for my fic at my usual rate for the next 6 weeks. Anyways, the class made me depressed, but when I saw your update, and it made me go "Happy, Happy, Joy, Joy!" :) Please update soon! Your suspensul ending is like nails on a blackboard right now for me. ::Hands you a mocha::
~Eri |
Reviewed By: Chibibabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 07:12 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: totally awesome, your soo good at this stuff! Write soon please! |
Reviewed By: Chibibabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 05:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome, this is soooo good! I can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Jam( to family) Dilan (to friends) On: February 25, 2003 23:26 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Must, know, what, happend next,Up Date Soon
" THE SUSSPENCE IS KILLING ME!"
{ I MEAN IT } |
Reviewed By: DeathAngelRn On: February 23, 2003 16:08 CST Comment/Review: Heh, I completely forgot to mention that I would love it if you made a site just for Sess/Kag fics!
I have one fic that I'm working on now, it's kind of crapy though. It is posted on Fanfiction.net, it's title is Vengeance. Please take a look at it to see if it would be worthy of your site. (If you make it.)
Once again, please forgive me if I offended you at all in my last review. I tend to be rather harsh on people, especialy myself. (Ex. In these two reviews I probably made tons of mistakes in spelling/grammar, etc.)
Lol, I'll shut up now! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DeathAngelRn On: February 23, 2003 15:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: The style of writing and originality of this story were pretty good, though not the best I've seen. I would like to see a bit more of Sesshoumaru's point of view, rather than mostly Kagome's.
As far as the spelling and grammar goes, it is actually really well done. The reason I didn't give you a 10? Well that is simply because there are too many (and sometimes rather stupid) rules about perfection. Please don't take it personally, I don't know anyone who has mastered all those rules. (I know I haven't!)
As for enjoyment, it couldn't be better. I am loving the story and the charcters reactions. It is quite entertaining, not at all boring.
Finally, to end this stupidly long review, the overall rating was simple. It's a great story, you avoided making silly mistakes, and I think the characters are remaining pretty much in character. Please keep up the good work and update soon. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 20:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DAMN THAT JAKEN!!!!!!!!
SOMETHING ALWAYS HAS TO INTERUPT THE PERFECT
MOMENTS!!!! WHY IS THAT?!?!?!? I DEMANED THAT YOU
TELL ME NOW!!!!
*just kidding*
please continue the story!!!! |
Reviewed By: tina On: February 21, 2003 03:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very good please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: February 20, 2003 21:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SO CUTE!!! You must continue soon. ^_^
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: Rei On: February 20, 2003 21:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: tessa On: February 20, 2003 20:01 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have read the forth chapter on fanfiction.net and it was great...the enjoyment factor would be higher so I will give it 110%...it was GREAT...I just love Sess/kag fics.. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 16:53 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *giggles* Sex-Y!!
I LOVED the hotsprings chapter!! Bring on more chappies!!!! XD
The website idea sounds cool. You should talk to my friend diva_eyez because she LOVES the Sess/Kag pairing now (and will be writing more fics for them to romp in ;) And you should check out MiniMorr's "TheBet" (my first Sess/Kag)
Umm... well, that's enough outta me!!
Write more write more write more write more write more 'cause this fic ROCKS!!! ...what can I say, ever since the ep when Sess meets Rin ... I decided to label him as TOtal hotty!! *drools* |
Reviewed By: dxgirly2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 22:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is one of the best Sess/Kagome fics I've ever seen, I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please post soon!! |
Reviewed By: iyia On: February 19, 2003 21:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hey i luv da sess/kag idea their should be more stories about it but i'm thinking of making one
u'r story was pretty good too 5 stars. :-)
more chapters please |
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