"School of Magick" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon On: February 16, 2003 10:40 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think Kaiba should be be a shadow user, anlong with Yami Bakura, since they both are pretty cold. And Shizuka should be a light user, since she's so kind. Very creative! I really like it so far!
Keep updating! |
Reviewed By: Kye On: February 16, 2003 04:04 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi! I like your story, it's interesting.
So please continue soon.^_^
Oh and I think Kaiba should be Water or Fire.He is Yugis' rival after all.
Y.Bakura should be Shadow or just to be diffrent(and totaly contrasting)Light.
Shizuka should have Air. |
Reviewed By: silvermoonstar On: February 15, 2003 22:29 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Kaiba-aquamancer
Yami Bakura-shadowmancer
Shizuka-illummancer
Keep up the fic, it's really,really interesting!! can't wait to see what happens next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 18:49 CST Comment/Review: Me again.
1: Kaiba should have Shadow.
2: Shizuka should have Light.
And
3: Yami Bakura should have Shadow.
Enjoy. |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 18:21 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: If thiers an element for Daeth thin it shoud go to kiaba if not make him a shadow element and bakura is the same as yami ^.^
keep going! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 16:21 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW! You have the coolest ficcie ever in the history of Mediaminer! I'm going to stick to this fic like glue!
My recommodations
1. I believe Kaiba should be a fire type like Yuugi. After all, they're supposed to be rivals and it would be more of a challange if they are they same.
2. Yami Bakura should be Shadow, he is evil yah know!
3. Shizuka should be water I think, either that or air like Ryou, because she is kinda like a flowing person, not rough, like others. |
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 15:02 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chapter! I can't wait till we get some fluff between Yami and Yugi. By the way here are what I think Kaiba, Shizuka, and Y.Bakura.
Kaiba: Water Elemental
Y.Bakura: Shadow Elemental
Shizuka: Light Elemental
Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 15:13 CST Comment/Review: Get goin' on it! More! |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 00:09 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: cool, but i can see yugi as fire his more of a earth element sweet and jental.
keep going ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Kairi On: February 13, 2003 11:57 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Cool story!!!
Write more soon |
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 19:38 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice plot. Really good wording. Yugi seems more of a light elemental to me. He's just soo sweet and bright! ^_^ Betcha five pesos that Yami's a shadow elemental! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon On: February 13, 2003 21:03 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very creative and origanal! I rallt liked it! And I'm guessing Kaiba's gonna be a shadow user, right? Anyway, great story! |
Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:33 CDT Comment/Review: Aw! how sweet! I was thinking that Yami would probably be using shadow instead of fire and Yugi would probably be using light. But oh well, it's still good! |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 20:17 CST Comment/Review: ^___^ happy duel! ^__^ i liked the duel but couldn't help but laugh. in the eps some duels will take like a friggin million years ^__^ happy duel! i liked it though. get to the Ryou/Bakura fluffiness soon k? ^__^ happy writing! |
Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 11:34 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: KEEP WRITING!!!! This is a good fic. New chapter. New chapter. I think Yami's a shadowmancer. |
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