| "The Joy of Joy" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: NASTY!! YET SEXYY!!
Reviewed By: ALMIGHTY SHIVVAAA!! On: December 18, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOO!! THAT WAS WEIRD BUT KIK ASSS!! NURSE JOYS A WHORE..THATS HOW SHE SHOULD BE I THE SERIES..I REALLY LIKED YOUR FANFIC AND EVEN TOLD MY FREINDS TO READ IT TOO!! I HAVE NO LIFE HEHEHE..COOLY HENTAI XOXOXOXOXO SHIVA XOXOOXOXOX
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Reviewed By: ZAROK On: September 18, 2003 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it you should finnish. I hate cliffys |
Reviewed By: zedragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont often read stories but I have to say i realy like this one. in the 4 parts iv read so far i love it after about 10 minutes of reading this i was hooked. Hope to seen more really soon this its to good to leave unfinished. |
Reviewed By: Who are you? Please enter your name. On: July 16, 2003 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I followed you're story for awhile, falcon! WHEN WILL YOU FINISH IT?! It's been like this ever since fanfiction.net disowned all it's lemons... |
Reviewed By: Jaguar77 On: June 18, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Finish this is one of the best Pokenmon stories out there. |
Reviewed By: fox On: June 16, 2003 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic i've been searching for a long time for something this good need to watch the language though |
Reviewed By: Becky Paden On: June 11, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a little wrong at first, I thought, but then it gradually became amazing. I love this fic! |
Reviewed By: demonmistress On: April 04, 2003 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
want more...need more...please write more. |
Reviewed By: Davin Oran "Xoas" Prower On: March 16, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is this the best writen fic I have ever had the plesure of reading and I am waiting ith thining paticence for how it will end , because this is to good to leave this tale unfinihed
I'm waiting for this great tale to come to n end. |
Reviewed By: darkrider852 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have only one simple request as
as sorcerer, and that is TO SEE THE FRIEKEN ENDING
OF THE STORY! I HAVE NOT WRITTEN ONE STORY THAT IS INCOMPLETE SO FAR AND I DONT PLAN TO!!!
WRITE IT ALREADY! WHATS SO HARD ABOUT DOING THAT??? COMON!the story was extremley great and everything but wheres the ending?? your leaving us in a waitin haze for god sakes! (oh yeah, and could you please look at my stories and review them?)thanks)-darkrider852, the crow, mog ur. |
Reviewed By: Mystic Mewtwo On: February 27, 2003 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very beautifully written story. I enjoyed it so much.
It's very tasteful in the intimate scenes, and I like that a lot. I cannot stand when people write sex as being so dirty, when it is a truly beautiful thing to experience.
Your story is one of those rare few that are out there. Keep up the fantastic work. I'd love to see more soon.
On a little side note, I simply love Mewtwo, and have written a story similiar to this.
It is up at ffn, under the same name, Mystic Mewtwo, and you may check it out if you wish. I may consider putting it up here. |
Reviewed By: cratbro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This author is one of two who I congradulate on overall good spelling and grammer, creativity, conbined with skill all in one. Great job. |
Reviewed By: Lemon Critic On: February 23, 2003 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
abso-bloody-god-damn-lutely one of the bests stories I have ever read, a couple spelling errors is all that stands in your way from a perfect ten. |
Reviewed By: Zero Schneider On: February 18, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horny little bastards aren't they? |
Reviewed By: Brock_the_hentai_lover On: February 16, 2003 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this over at FF.net, it was one of the first stories I thought about when they annouced they would take off all the "good" stories off. It pissed me off cuz I didn't know if I would get to see the end, I love this story, and I can't wait until chapter 5. Great story falcon! |
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