| "Chupacabras Synchronicity" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kanami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 22:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you leave me hanging like that? It is cruel...and so very wrong. *pouts*
Once again, you have a fabulous, enthralling story going here. I loved Psionic Saga!! :)
I can't wait for the next chapter to see what is going to happen! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:00 EST
Comment/Review:
Me again, though you should be getting used to me by now ;)
Another great chapter, but left me hanging wanting more so it was really actually cruel.
Golden Rat, if you havent read the psionic saga it is probably a good idea to do so... it gives you the background you'll need for this one. Should make it a little less confusing.
Keep up the good work
~Arith |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat On: February 20, 2003 19:00 EST
Comment/Review:
good story. lots of unkown background however. I don't get it, do they have powers or don't they? Next chaper please! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 12:31 EST
Comment/Review:
Now I finally have steady internet access again, I have caught up reading this story and just wanted to say: Excellent, excellent, excellent! Oh did I mention excellent.
You have taken an amazingly original concept and turned it into a fic that is almost spell binding. Your style of writing flows smoothly and you make the characters believable.
I am a big fan of Duo not being portrayed as an idiot, and they way you make him into a stronger person than most other authors do is done so well that it is simply taken as part of his character.
Thank you for providing such a good read and please keep it up, because I am hanging for the next chapter :)
~Arith |
Reviewed By: Dez On: February 17, 2003 15:02 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start for a sequel to The Psionic Saga!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dez On: July 02, 2003 22:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
You know this fic is awesome! The worst part for me is I used to be afraid of the Chupacabras! I saw an unsolved mystery's at my Grandparents and have been afraid ever since. LOL. Great story. Keep updating!! |
Reviewed By: MoonCatBlue On: February 16, 2003 17:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're churning these out at a great rate of knots - which is good as I'm hooked and needing more to satisfy my craving. |
Reviewed By: MoonCatBlue On: February 15, 2003 23:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good - if this is as good as the Psion Saga was - which wouldn't surprise me in the least - then I'll be begging for more. keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
INTERESTING!!! Really interesting!! I love it! The story flows along and AGAIN it was very interesting ^_^ I think I can love the sequel too.
I noticed some mistakes in the chapters, but there are not THAT big.
Well, since this is a sequel to the other fic of yours, I think this fic should very much deserve a 10 for originality. Now I wonder what more strange things is going to happen... and how many strange beings are coming up ^____^
I love the 2 chapters. Really well written, and AGAIN the characters have their places. Luckily I've finished that other fic of yours so there's no way I'm getting too confused >:D about.
Please keep updating!! It's very interesting! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 07:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok ok so i gave you tens this time. You have me completely hooked. I absolutely adore the way that you make the characters come to life and the way that you detail there personalities. Sometimes maybe a little ooc but to be honest, I think that the way each person interprets a character is different, and therefore the character is always in character with that interpretation. You deffinatley keep them in the characters that you have built them up to be.
Anyway that was a rather long review from me. Could you if possible, keep me updated as to when you update? That would be great. arithkenshin@yahoo.co.uk
Please keep writing |
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