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| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] | | Pages (20): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: CleverWitch On: March 05, 2003 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and your writing is excellent. I hope to read more soon. | Reviewed By: jumper On: March 05, 2003 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your site!! As you may know, i do hate pan, but i also hate marron, and you may not like to hear that. I just wanted to let you know i will be the one to marry trunks and we will fall in love and have a daughter named pan. we love eachother very much. I also love the way you made vageta go for pan like that, that was sooo funny!!!!! | Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 21:47 EST
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its still great so all I have to say is, more more more more more more, I can't wait till the next chapter | Reviewed By: Lady love On: March 03, 2003 22:22 EST
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Great chapter, but poor Sess. I feel so sorry for him. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out to see what sess. does to get Kagome to be more alive! Update soon! | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* That chapter was WONderful!! I was delighted that you continued from where you left us wanting more in chapter8. *snickers* Imagine. Sess jealous of ... Shippou??? *LMAO* That was PRICEless!! XD
While Sesshoumaru was taking his bath-- O.O *drools*-- I realized how well you describe everythings. Especialy laying the scene/setting.
*sniffles* Poor Sesshou!! Love what you did with his past. It really helps to explain him and his reactions more. (I'm kind of wondering if he's be the reluctant "love" kind of guy. ie, not calling it love because he doesn't want it to be like the love that he saw dissolve between his parents. *sniff*) *shrugs*
O.O From your "teaser" for chapter 11, I must say . . . HURRY up and post it already!!
*snickers* "takes matters into his own hands" ^_~
OH yeah...I remember that Kimodo dragons run fast--now! *lol* O.O FULL demon!?!??! Like Fluffy was hinting at, explain explain exPLAIN Inu's FULL wish... eventually!! *crosses arms* I can wait. *taps fingers* Patiently. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Damn. Inu has a heart. That was good. Hell, I thought it was DAMN good.
I was told I could come back to you one day.
Hm... I wonder how/when/if, though. He needs to learn and PRACTICE his lesson before that can happen. But I wonder... *head hurts* Errrg!! I don't want to OVERthink this and get it right... (*lol* it CAN happen; I knew what was going to happen on JoeMillionaire when they first mentioned the "twist" -_-) For some reason, my first thought (when Inu 1st found out from Juuki that he could go back, eventually) was that maybe he'd show up as a child of Kagome's. But now that'd be... weird. But then again... he probably wouldn't even remember what happened to him in his previous life, so... I guess I'll just say, that it would be heartwrenching for me to read of him coming back(NOT has her kid for this scenario, of course), showing up, and interfering in a relationship between her and Sesshoumaru. (ie, Inu trying to win her back) But that's just me... I think the Sess/Kag pairing should STAND for this fic. (I think I've said this a thousand times but they're a sexy pairing *lol*)
At first I was like, what song is that? (I SO do not pay attention to main-stream music, lately) But then as I read the lyrics I found myself singing them aloud. And when I got to "Runaway with my heart..." (I know... it took me long enough -_-) ... I realized I've heard this song before. In fact, after reading this story/the lyrics in the entirty I had a STRONG urge to try and download that song. (still might) *lol* Anyway, I thought the song was PERfect. ^_~
*rereads the whole review she just typed* ....I MUST be nuts. First I nearly burn down my house because of POPcorn, and now I can't write about anything without me losing track of what I mean to say in the first place. O.O I think I should go laydown... ~.~
I realize I'm not saying much today, but it's a short chapter and I don't want to give it away. It just HAS to be read for yourself. :)
I'll read the newest chapter today as well, but I don't know when I'll be able to review. -_- Anyways, keep writing! ^_^ | Reviewed By: GREAT On: April 06, 2003 12:13 EDT
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THIS IS A GREAT STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! | Reviewed By: TaY On: March 02, 2003 14:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really have enjoyed this fic...it really makes y ou think....I have read other fics when Kagome is change into a youkai or hanyou and you have did the best job of capturing the moment and the transformation.. I truly hope you finish this story....I have a thought of ehat might ha[[en w/ inuyasha but I want to see you outcome and to see if I was rght...I give your fic a 10.5 enjoyment rating.... | Reviewed By: Chick On: February 28, 2003 21:11 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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This story is really good!!! Poor Inu!! can't wait to see some kag/sess action!! | Reviewed By: Karete-chan On: February 28, 2003 06:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. Inu's dead and he still manages to get Kagaome. now that's what I call writing! Now what abput Sess? *taps foot impaiteintly* | Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 01:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love your story and its still sad...but I guess I just like to cry...I feel so sad for poor Inu Yasha...but let me just say this a good story always make you feel and you story defenily does that for me...so keep writing them bye I guess tell next chapter ^.~ | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 01:07 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O.O Sesshoumaru... *stares for awhile and then realizes a puddle of drool is covering the laptop*
*giggles* I LOVED the ending to that chapter!! It was SO... I can't say. It's weird, I want to shout outloud what happened and how much I loved it!!! But I don't want to give it away. *everyone facevaults* I know... me NOT giving away a huge plot twist in a review?? I MUST be crazy!! *lol* Or maybe it's just so damn good that all of you HAVE to read it. ^_~
LOVED the whole scene with the Komodo (I'm really impressed that you mentioned the poisonous/bacteria-ridden saliva!!;), but afterward... *sniff* And did I mention that also LOVED the chapter title?? *snickers* SO cool!! *lmao* The BITCH is back... Hey, I'm not swearing!! Kagome's now a female half DOG-demon. :P
The shocking "twist" that Tsumi revealed was WAY better than that of JoeMillionaire and what Simon is likely to reveal on AmericanIdol. It was subtle, but I picked it up. Poor Sesshou... he had BETTER take care of Kagome so the past isn't repeated!!! Or else... *sniffles*
*starry eyed* I still can't believe you sent me chapter9 already. *hears a bunch of guns cocking, sharp objects unsheathing, Miko and Youkai powers alike growing, and ki blasts forming* No. *crosses arms* I am NOT going to tell you what happens in chapter9. *grins* I made a promise to the authoress that I intend on guarding with my life. ^_^
I can't believe that you actually added ANGST to the genres(hey, it fits)... *grins stupidly* ...am I THAT much of a freak?? Give me some credit here... I love romance MORE. ;) I believe that the sweet is SO much more powerful when it comes after the dark and bittersweet. (the light is only light and bright because of the deep contrast of the dark) *shrugs* That's just my opinion. ^_^
Well, I'm off to RE-read chapter9. Yeah, you read right. ^_~ | Reviewed By: Meamiko On: February 27, 2003 21:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt so special when you wrote me a little note at the end ^_^ I know I'm pathetic but oh well! I still really love your story and thank you soooooooo much for updating as quickly as you do! I bet people that read my stories wish I would update this quick ^_^ Your idea seems really thought out and really well formed. Out of curiosity, do you have it planned out completely or are you thinking as you go? Anyhoozles I really enjoy your stories and I can't wait to read more! *hands you a cookie and bounds off!* Ja! | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 16:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They did WHAT!?!?!? *falls over in shock*
*comes to, sniffling* Poor Kagome. She's just so damn lonely. Uhhh... is she still "in heat" or is this after it?? Sorry, just wondering.
I LOVE this story SO damn much it hurts!! *sniffs some more* I want Kagome to get some comfort, dammit!! I mean... she regrets it (the lemon) happening, right?? I can't comprehend what it must be like for her. I mean, she's a virgin who just had sex in a dream with a soul, so... is it kind of like spiritual virginity loss?? Like, she FEELS like she would after losing her virginity, but all the physical stuff is still there. Like, Sesshoumaru won't notice a change in her "sent" or something, right??
*shrugs* I don't know what I'm saying. It must be the lonliness. *heh*
That preview for the next chapter looks AWEsome!! She's gonna go all youkai on an enemy. Woo hoo!! I hope she's okay, though. *sniff* And that Sesshoumaru will take care of her if something BAD happens. But I'd rather she defends herself well and he's more in awe, proud, and respects her.
Umm... would you mind emailing me (duonotsuin@yahoo.com) when you update this story?? MM NEVER sends me the update mails. *sniffles* Arigatou gozaimasu!! I LOVE this story SO much and can't wait for more!! ^_^
OH, I almost forgot. Seeing as how Kagome is depressed and it seems to be getting worse... maybe you should add ANGST to the categories. *shrugs* Just a suggestion. *sniffles some more* | Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 08:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOh That was so sad, thank you for that it was so sweet and sad I loved it...your doing a excelent job so far (and I can't spell) | | Pages (20): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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