| "Kindred" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:50 CST
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I agree with mischief maker, Evil cliffhanger but I loved that Bardock cleans up real nice, sexy help is hard to find. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:39 CST
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Bgurl, you really should look into finding a literary agent. The way you paint pictures with your words is breathtaking. I can't wait to see what you do to these readers when the lemon hits. There are going to be some smoking PC's out there! XD You're a joy to read. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNIT
I HAD THIS CLEVER, ADORABLE REVIEW ALL TYPED OUT AND THIS STUPID MACHINE SCREWED IT UP SOMEHOW!
*catches breath*
I just wanted to say you are awesome, and you are NOT ALLOWED to wait that long in updating anymore ^_^
love ya |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>_ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 16:36 CST
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Oh no! You ended there???!!! (crosses arms and pouts) I was finally distracted from the fact that they'd been so rudely interrupted earlier on. And now they are alone....
Ack, update soon PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: PistolGrip [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 04:49 CST
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Please continue. Very interesting piece, you don't see much Bardock fics around. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely super. Man, Bardy is a bad boy isn't he? I love they way he hit her head with his tail. Quite the comedian I'd say. He's bold too, letting her know what's on his mind ^_~. So now that they're alone are they gonna... you know, do the olde in-out? Hurry up Mel I'm salivating here!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 09, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit Bgurl, I'm hooked!! I loved your descriptions of the area, what they both felt when they saw each other as well as their conversations. Lucky girl, whoever she is. There aren't enough "Bardock comes to earth before Goku" fics. I'm so glad you posted this ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Lance On: March 06, 2003 08:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Barb this was excellent! I love thier playfull flirting. I love how you display both Bardocks lust for fighting and for the woman that captured him. You have good use of words and get the point across. I can't for the next part. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes yes kepp it up I love this fic, always have and all ways will, he he |
Reviewed By: Cyntigre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finish the story!!!! Man oh man... Excuse me, I must regain my composure.... *sigh* Okay. Wow. Bardock sure is yummy isn't he XP It's funny though, because I'm not much for het fics, but I'm hooked on this one. It's a very original premise. And I like the female character too, which is a rarity for me. Post up the next chapter now! Must have more Bardock!!! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 21:40 CST
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Um... that was supposed to be 'Dammit', not 'Dammin' 8-} |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
of that sexy hunk of Saiya-jin flesh. Bardock just begs to be... um... appreciated, ya know? Barbara, you simply have a way of drawing people into your stories. We're all dying to know what happens next. Who is this woman? What is she? When are she and Bardock going to get the chance to be alone? Dammin, woman, we want answers! Stop everything you're doing and focus on quenching our thirst for more Bardock/??? |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD but Bardykins IS the SEXIEST of all full bloods, isn't he??? ~sigh~ Sexy devil. Poor Vegeta and Goku...how sad to be outclassed by a third class soldier or your father?
But I digress. About the fic...WOW!!! Bardykins is a sexy devil, isn't he? Oh wait, I said that before. LOVE the plot, VERY original. I think this is the first Bardy comes to Earth fic that I've read!!
I'm VERY intrigued by the female character, I'm DYING to see what she really is!! And GOD the chemistry between them is electric!! Very seductive, very tangible, you are writing an EXTREMELY erotic fic here, girl!! Can't wait for the rest!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: tina On: February 19, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good i just cant praise it enough. you should be published for the world to read, such talent shouldnt be allowed to go to waste. i hope there is a publisher reading this, because they need to get hold of you. you will make them a fortune |
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