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Reviewed By: MaaaaaaaadNikki On: October 13, 2003 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You would've gotten 10 if it was Yuffie and Vincent. =P But the way you wrote the fanfic really tore my heart into half... poor Vinnie, no, poor Rufie... arrgh!
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Reviewed By: Aoi Shinkiro [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 10:47 CST
Comment/Review:
*I mean read! Gomen... |
Reviewed By: Aoi Shinkiro [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, this could be the best Yuffie story I've ever written. *adds to list of good stories* |
Reviewed By: Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff* You're too good at these romance stories ;.;... It was so beautiful... There's no other way to describe it... You have to be very proud of yourself as I am very happy you write fanfiction ^-^ Keep on writin'! I love all your work!
Oh yeah, and I love people who do plot twists-^o^-! |
Reviewed By: Kapies [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2002 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I already reviewed, but that was when I thought Yuffie would end up with Vincent. The new rating is prety high considering I hate anyone besides Vincent being with Yuffie. You made a good twist at the end that I wasn't expecting. Next time could you not give it a twist and have Yuffie and Vincent end up together please!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jyuulii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still crying. >< I love Vincent! I love him! You make him so.. romantic and stricken. It's heartbreaking. I love him. I want him to be okay at the end. Please let everything get better for him. *sob* I am a hopeless romantic and want things to turn out 'happily ever after', but.. my god.. I could visualize i>everything that happened! From Reno sprawled feline in a chair, pushing up his sunglasses, to Yuffie and the toothbrush. You don't go overboard with the description, but you write it so that it still conveys the meaning and sensibly, too. It's.. clear. It's perfect. I'm a writer, too, but this is just.. beautiful, the clarity of it. The way you make us care so damn much about the characters. *runs off, sobbing "Vincent!"* ^^ Keep writing. Do. |
Reviewed By: kapies On: February 07, 2002 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Vincent and Yuffie fics, infact I can't read anything else that involvs Yuffie or Vincent. I love your story, they don't just sudenly cliqua and stay together. It is a fight realy, for love, and I love it. So please wright more, and soon. |
Reviewed By: Ang On: February 01, 2002 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You r soooooo rude! You just leave me in suspence like that! |
Reviewed By: Gage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2002 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good job, dood.
I really think you have the makings of a born author! Good lad.
From your fellow author,
Gage |
Reviewed By: NightCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2002 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till you write more.And i'm a HUGE fan of Yuffie/Vinnie fic's!!! ::hint hint:: |
Reviewed By: shegirl On: January 20, 2002 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! Please continue it soon! I'm killing myself trying 2 find out who Yuff chooses! |
Reviewed By: U know who On: January 19, 2002 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, please make a new chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: no one On: January 19, 2002 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic! THIS TOTALY ROCKES!I love Yuffie/Vincent fics, so that's probably why I like it so much! Keep on writeing! |
Reviewed By: A.G. On: January 19, 2002 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make a new chapter soon! I need 2 find out who she chooses(Yuffie)! |
Reviewed By: Gunka On: January 19, 2002 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that fic totaly rocked! Keep on writeing! |
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