| "So close.....yet so far away" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Talya On: July 03, 2003 08:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked this fic. Kaoru's a bitch she deserves to get hurt. I hope that sano doesn't get hurt that much though. You realy don't hav to lisen to me at all. but UPDATE SOON PLEASE! Your a great writer and I might forget where I saw this fic and not see this again |
Reviewed By: Zera On: June 29, 2003 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. (^-^) Please let me know when you continue. zera_24@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: serena On: May 15, 2003 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all what i have to say for the monent is "WOW! i haven't read anything like this. Kenshin and Sano GAY!!!! CRAP!!! maybe Saitou should go with Yahiko.?" that would be heaps funny...keep up the good work ok. update soon. seeya |
Reviewed By: BaYbHiE_AnGeL On: May 14, 2003 06:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
this fic is great!!!!!!!!
plz ryt soon.........
also... hope it'll be "S/K" fic...
i really LOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEE this pairing!!!
keep up d good work baby! |
Reviewed By: Yugi's Angel On: May 11, 2003 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story, you got to write more. I can't wait what happens to sano. Well g2g for now Laters |
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, it has my favorite RK pairing (SxK), and it has a yummy amount of angst. It also has Kaoru getting told off (which I was VERY pleased with). So, it has more than struck my interest.
However, I have some constructive crit for you, my dear. Try reading over what you write before you post it to reduce spelling and grammar errors. Or, better yet, have someone you know is good with such things read it over. The mechanics of the fic are lacking, while the content is very promising. In other words: the story is very good, but you have to work on your typing and grammar skills.
Oh, and you have a tiny plot hole. In the second part, the letter from Aoshi states where he has Sano, while in the third part Kenshin starts off having no idea where to go. Guessing from the Kyoto arc of the series, and how easily Shishio's men were able to find Aoshi simply by going to the graves of his fallen friends, that location isn't exactly the hardest to discover. |
Reviewed By: MillenniumPurityMegami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erg....You damn cliffhanger!!! You HAVE, I REPEAT, HAAAVVVVVEEEEE to finish this story! I love K/S and I sooo despise Karou! > |
Reviewed By: ryoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Its so Kawaii [= please continue. I'll cheack back every time I'm on line so keep updating please. |
Reviewed By: Starr Dust On: April 14, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic. I didn't like the fact that Yahiko was so evil, but hey, that's just me. |
Reviewed By: kc On: June 06, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello!!! this is a great story!!! the only reason i gave you an 8 is cause there are so many sano/kenshin fics out there. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel bot On: April 02, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kaoru is evil. I hope she rots. Anyway I overall enjoyed reading this story. |
Reviewed By: Korie Himura On: March 31, 2003 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THE FICCIE!!!!!! I hope you write more soon!!! I think the real reason I absoutely love this is becuase it
1. Is Sano/Kenshin
2. It says what a bitch Kaoru is.
3. I hate Yahiko
4. It's generally a good story!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: March 28, 2003 06:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good!!!! write more soon!!! i g2g now or else this would be longer bye. |
Reviewed By: evil Jy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 09:37 CST
Comment/Review:
well, as good as you can write you seem to have a strange sense of time... a day??? it's more than a day since you promised to continue this fic. :-/
please, don't keep us hanging. I really like what you have written so far and want to know comes next... |
Reviewed By: Koia On: February 22, 2003 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic!!! Please continue it. I really wanna find out why Aoshi took Sano.
Poor Sano ;_; |
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