| "A Not So Normal High School Story" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 On: August 06, 2003 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Keep it up. It is great so far. |
Reviewed By: TigerJade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! This is a cute fic! Hehe continue soon, you're doing a great job! The part where Inuyasha hit Miroku continually was funny. I imagined in in my head ^^;; Well do continue, it looks like its gonna be a successful fic.
I do have a suggestion and don't be mad ^^; Maybe it's my computer but at the end, the story seems to get all clustered up. Try to split the paragraphs and when someone else starts speaking, its a new paragraph.. eh maybe its my computer. But anyway, continue soon!!
-jade |
Reviewed By: lia_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv ur fic!!! pls. continue 2 update soon |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 On: February 22, 2003 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you got me hooked!!!!!
I love the story please continue!!!!!!
PLEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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