| "Faulty Reasoning" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal ^_^ On: October 14, 2003 23:20 CDT
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Nice chapter. When's Jou gonna make a move? Ryou is so incredibly shy - he's so cute! Keep it up
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: redconvoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say, I have never heard the phrase "you haven't seen any action since your conception" in any part of any story. This was funny!
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Title: Please!
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: October 14, 2003 11:54 CDT
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Please! Continue it! It's so funny!!! I'd love to see Ryou and Jono! ^_^
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Title: Momma Cat
Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I could review or I could just sit here and wait for the next chapter.*sitting* *waiting* Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Zinx On: September 24, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ehhh... not bad I suppose . What are you a brain surgeon ? You use too many words having to do with the brain it made me go looking for a dictionary . Love your story so far . By the is the guy who Jou kissed happends to be Seto ? They are just a very funny copule . Hope that you will write soon Syoonara ! zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz(wake me up when updated)zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...........................
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 20:11 CDT
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Come on this isn't funny!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OoOooOOOOOoo!!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 23:25 CDT
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 On: April 09, 2003 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's great! You're such a good writer! Ryou stories always intrigue me. Lol I always get ideas for stories at the weirdest most random places and times. Write more! You HAVE to!!! Please? |
Reviewed By: Debliss [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 14:41 CST
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This is really good hope you write more soon. |
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