| "Shinigami" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: 2x1Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooo, NCS 2x1...::purrs:: well, it's 2x1 so it's all good... |
Reviewed By: Jessica On: March 31, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I've never read a seme-Shinigami fic before, and it's good to find one... I think you're doing great on it... but the only thing that iffs me about it is HOW Duo turns into Shinigami. But hey, keep up the good work and that won't matter as much.
Ita-chan, you stink. What Shinigami did to Heero matches his personality completely... I mean, he DID say that he was Duo's lust and whatnot, didn't he? It's okay that you find Heero to be a better seme than Duo
(I do too), but come on, it fits in the story. Lighten up a bit. |
Reviewed By: Anar On: March 29, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope youŽll post the next chapter soon because I LOVE this fic of yours. |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 09:19 CST
Comment/Review:
wahhhhhh. please write more and update this again soon. I lurved it to bits and pieces and I can;t wait to see what you do next. I love it sooo much. PLease continue. Keep up the good work. mwa. 2X1 foreva. ja ne |
Reviewed By: Megami Riley On: March 12, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wai! can't wait till you update you fic! ^_^ it really really good! |
Reviewed By: jessica On: March 16, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are continuing this fic I read this fic when it was posted at ff.net and I have been look for it form the day that ff.net off nc-17 story continue it. Please write more........I really wanna know what happens next. You are an excellent author. |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 07:13 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. You are continuing this fic??? I ammmm sooooo happy. I read this fic when it was posted at ff.net and I have been looking forward to the day when you would continue it. Please write more........I really wanna know what happens next. Onegaiiiiishimasu. You are an excellent author. This is an amazing story. Keep up the good work.
I really look forward to another update.
You rule
Lurve ya heaps
Yume |
Reviewed By: Lita On: February 24, 2003 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Heero. Plez write more! continue soon! |
Reviewed By: kim On: February 23, 2003 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue! I want to find out what happens to Heero! Poor baby!!! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intriguing story. Though I have read a few that have a Duo being possessed by Shinigami story line, so the concept in itself isnt entirely original, but the way it is written is well done and is making me really want to find out what happens next.
Keep writing
~Arith |
Reviewed By: Kyo On: February 23, 2003 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, also i was just rereading this and the other story that you've written! Crazy huh? anyway, i like your story telling and the dark under tones too. please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Bleeding Star Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 12:42 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very good, very dark but not overly so. Didn't you have another stor where Duo losthis memory and became a gang leader and Heero went looking for him? |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: March 16, 2003 07:39 CST
Comment/Review:
AAAlllrriighttttt,..i confess that i like the whole Duo-bein-super-seme-turn-Shinigami thingy,...but,...don't ya think that practicly "raping" heero,..[sorry my bad spelling],...is takin things a bit too far???...O.O
*ssssigghhhhhh*...and poor heero,...continue soon kay,..i'm dying to know how heero gona survive bein atacked by a lust-crazy Duo/Shinigami,...*shudders*...keep-up the good work,..till next chapter,...JJJaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaanbbbaaattteeeeee-Neeeeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: bee On: March 16, 2003 05:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it
please update as fast as possible |
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