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| "Stranger of the Duel" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, you still rock.
^^;
I love this fic to bits and pieces.[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so awesomey. Keep on truckin', story's coming along in a most loverly fashion.
(PS! THIS IS REVIEW THIRTEEN! Do I get anything for being unlucky?)[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 07, 2003 09:50 CDT
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aww...I wanna find out what Calliope was in the past...DANG IT! Stupid cliff hangers...heh heh...post more soon![ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Alli On: July 06, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I absolutely LOVE it! The only thing I would change is that you write more, lol, I will be awaiting the next chapter!!! (and it better be here soon!)[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 04, 2003 00:37 CDT
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Yeah, this is me, I just forgot to log in. So Cali and BAKURA are now working together? Eh? How odd...But anyways, cool chapter. Poor Seto though...heh heh...please continue![ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 01, 2003 11:14 CDT
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OMG!! That is SO sad! Although Kaiba beating up Bakura was funny...you BETTER put them back together!! LOL...write more please! ;)[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 16:54 CDT
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Heh heh..cool. Kaiba to the rescue...AGAIN...Although I'm sure Calliope could kick Bakura's ahh...u know what..by herself... ;) Yeah. Right more![ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Such an interesting story line! I love it! I wish I had read it sooner! Defininely continue![ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwah, this is still one of my favorite fanfics, but you don't write as often as you should, and that pisses me off!! So get crackin'!
^_^!!!
Your characters are awesome, your storyline is awesome-ier, (is that like, even a word? o_o;;;), and you have great grammar and language skills!
*poke poke* Shurry up and write some more!![ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoo-rah, I *love* this fic!!! The storyline's awesomey, and I like the way you write a whole bunch. Not frilly and confusing (like I get sometimes, ugh), but wonderfully written, with a great understanding of grammar. I'm gonna keep poking at you to write more!!
*poke, poke, poke*[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: jupiter_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this. This is another style of writing I've never seen before. Keep it up![ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 09:04 CST
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xtreemmasheen3k2 I'm surprised that you didn't completely pick this story apart! Anywho, I think that this was a brillant peice of work and that I need to bonk both Kaiba and Cali with a mallet.
/Goes over to Cali and Kaiba and hauls off and smacks them on the head twice each with the oversized mallet/
Cali&Kaiba- X_XU
PP- That's for not getting it thru ur thick heads that you BOTH love each other. And, my turn to nit pick, Masheen, He said that "The force generated by your Gaurdian's attack might blow me off the edge of this wall. But are you willing to risk it?"
Sayonara! ~_^[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: calupe On: February 25, 2003 14:02 CST
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Thanks a lot for your review! Unfortunately, I've been going by the dubbed english version (if only i spoke japanese!) and so some facts were changed. With the whole Anzu-Yugi-Yami thing, there are a lot of fanfics with it, and so i just omitted the whole thing... I shouldn't have put Yugi liking Cali in there; it's not really relevant and it's not going to come up again. i know i've changed some of the characters a lot, but to get to the romance stuff, I've got to soften Kaiba up a lot. I can't really imagine him with a girl in that way... btw, the english version, he says to Yugi that if he attacked then the (i think...) electro-magnetic waves or somethingorothers would send him reeling over the wall. Also, I may be wrong, but I think Isis told him about Yami when she was showing him the stuff in the museum...or maybe she just said he was the reincarnation of him. I can't really remember.Thanks, calupe.[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: xtreemmasheen3k2 On: February 24, 2003 21:09 CST
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well, i'll give it ratings after a little more time. Okay, i'll review it while i read it. Oh yeah, and BTW, i to, am sick of the continuous Yaoi fics Yugioh gets. So i'm glad of a straight Yugioh pairing fic that's actually more than G. OKay, chapter one:
heh, the thing that happened between Anzu (e. Tea) and Honda (e. Tristan) remind me a lot of Misty and Brock from Pokemon. Yeah, Honda making an idiot of himself again. Funny thing is, Honda and Jonouchi (e. Joey) are usually up on par with idiocy. I guess that's what makes them best friends. On to chapter 2:
Heh, that's ALMOST an exact duplicate of Kaiba's personaility. Yeah, i guess that's how he would act to a girl. I guess Scizoran and Gonzaburu Kaiba (Kaiba's cruel, adpoted father) must have had sort of a business relationship together. Hey, i never thought of online dueling that way. I guess you're right in saying Kaiba wouldn't aprove of it. On to chapter 3:
Well, i've hlearned to live with people calling Yami Yugi just Yami, however, i still cringe when i read Yugi calling Yami Yugi "Yami". In the original japanese version, Yami Yugi never had that conversation with Yugi to call him "Yami". He doesn't know his name. He didn't know that he was a pharoah until Isis (e. Ishizu) told him. In the original, Yugi just calls Yami Yugi "other me". However, i have nothing against you doing it. Heh, Yugi and Yami Yugi hitting on Cali. Well, it doesn't really matter, but it isn't consistant with the fact that Yugi likes Anzu and Anzu likes Yami, with Yami not really liking anyone in "that way". Well, i don't exactly see Kaiba as the jealous type. I think it would have been better to portray him as in denial of him liking her, but that's just my view of what Kaiba's personality is more like. Also, Kaiba doesn't really differentiate from Yugi and Yami Yugi. He knows both of them as Yugi. Magnetism? I don't recall him saying anything about magnetism in the original or the dub. In the original, he said that he would jump off when his life points reached zero. Also, Kaiba would never dream of doing anything bad to Mokuba. But, i guess everything but the “You never listen to me!” “Leave me alone!” quote is accurate impressions of their personalities. I see this fic getting a lot better as more chapters get added keep it up.[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 22, 2003 18:13 CDT
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LOL! OMG that was funny! Calliope and Bakura bickering and stuff! LOL! Gosh, Oden and comp sure are dumb if they couldn't hear them throwing each other off the roof or throwing fireballs at each other.. *snickers* Dumb bad guys...Anywaya, please continue![ Request Review Removal ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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