| "Tails of Troubles" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: victim of incest On: March 08, 2003 00:05 CST
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you are sick. ever do it with your father. it hurts. it isn't right to write about crimes as if they are ok and that fathers should "love" their children. may you be f**ked in the ass by the very last person you would ever want to do it with. |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:45 CST
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*Glomps Jady* I so look forward to your updates!!
I feel so bad for Goten in this chapter. He's so confused! And I have a bad feeling there is going to be a major fight in the next chapter! I can't wait to read it!!
PG-Star |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 19:03 CST
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I think there's gonna be a fight!!! Heh heh. I feel so bad for Goten though. He's probably freaking out after all of that! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:04 CST
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Yay Goku!
Trunks is having... ambiguous emotions involving Goten? Hmmmmm.
Poor Goten. Hope there's a reward for his suffering somewhere along the line... |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky On: March 05, 2003 14:13 CST
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Oooh!
How could you end it there????? That was cruel!!
I like the thoughts turning in Trunks' head, and how his perfect world isn't quite so perfect any more.
And now for the part you knew would come eventually: GO GOKU!! I like him all aggressive, and it seems Vejita does too... Betrayal, shmayal.
*spork* |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
*squeals*
you are SO totally awesome!! ^_^ as i said before, I am no fan of incest fics... but damnit, this is just TOO good!
*stares at her single DBZ poster*
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN
write more soon! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 04:54 CST
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Puuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
I was right... it wasn't that hard to guess, mind you. Heh, NOW I wonder if Goku's gonna seek out his son Goten. Talk about a fic with rampant incest!
Go Trunks, go! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 16:38 CST
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Oooh, what's he going to wish for? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 15:51 CST
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I can't believe you had Goku rape infant Goten in that chapter!! Dude, that was NOT funny! I hope that never happens to you!
*giggles* *ducks*
Seriously, though, that was interesting. Your style is very smooth and I do love your Vegeta. Shall we be expecting lovely tails soon?
Will Goku ever be allowed saiyajin love again, or is he banished forever to the harpy? Can ever YOU be that cruel?
(Gee, can I whine any more about that? *laughs*) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow a great ep, this is a very good love triangel. And intresting how it will end. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see more!!! And don't worry, i do not agreed with the last reviewer... Tell me by mail when you'll write another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Little Wild One On: February 26, 2003 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry dude, this is gross. Every kind of sex is not ok! Are you one of those who believe "sex by 8 or it's too late" also? What next, Vegeta has sex with infant Trunks? Have YOU ever been raped? It isn't sexy or a turn on. The reporting of a rape, isn't so bad, but any suggestion that rape is anything but a heinous crime is wrong. Perhaps you were trying to be original, but that doesn't make it good. I am not a prude. I have enjoyed many "kinky" fics including "Houseguest" by Little ningin but none include incest. There is a natural aversion to incest even among apes for a reason.
PS
Many women have rape fantasies, but it is not the same thing. I hope you never experience rape. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is going to be good I can all ready tell. keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, no big surprise, 'cause I've loved EVERYTHING you've written! Your style of writing is excellent, and this is DEFINITELY an original storyline! I love Vegeta and Trunks together (Trunks with a braid...DROOOOOOL!!!), the way you've written them is so touching!!
BUT!! I'm a TRUTEN FREAK, so it thrills me to the ends of the Earth that you are throwing a little Goten into the mix!! YAAAAAY!! Even if he CAN'T win, it'll still be fun to watch the chaos!!
Now about the earlier review, it was SO obviously not a rape that you were writing!! The reviewer definitely hadn't read the previous fic or he/she would have known that. But the thing is, as much as we wish the Saiyajins were real (and some of us believe they live with us!), they really AREN'T! You aren't documenting something that has happened, it is FICTION! Didn't happen, won't happen, not real. It's entertainment, it's not to be taken so seriously. If the reader doesn't find what they are looking at to be entertaining, there is nothing stopping them from clicking the back button. Your fic was delicious, Jady, so please don't pay any mind to that review, or any flames that you might ever receive. You are writing for yourself, and for those who enjoy this type of story. Those who don't needn't read it. Problem solved. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 04:26 CST
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:whimpers and falls over:
Wow, Vegeta actually used lube... after a fashion. Dear god what I'd give to experience things from Trunks' point of view for this little interlude! Nummy nummy nummy!
So glad you're continuing this storyline! |
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