| "Welcome To Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
phew! i havent read anything in a while! as uaual, i love ur stuff ^_^. poory ryou, but im begining to get used to seto rapeing people ~_^. but keep on goin! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh don't leave us there. good chapter |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: May 09, 2003 12:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, the confusion of lookalikes. Good twist. Although I'm slightly confused... why didn't Bakura figure out that it wasn't Yami that hurt Ryou, since he found Yami traveling back to the palace? Anyway, Bakura's got a choice ahead of him... I can't wait to see how you're going to fit things together, hopefully in a happy-ish ending. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 08:31 CDT
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Sweet!!!! OOOooooo, I luv it...It;s going great...I'll go now (~_^))))) |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: April 30, 2003 07:55 CDT
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this is really really good. What's gonna happen to my lights? Malik better hide again...poor Ryou. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 08:17 CDT
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That was mean----a cliffy!!! Oh well, I give you the command to continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 08:41 CDT
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PP- You have to update!!! This was a good story!! \^o^/
YPP- Time for your meds... /drags PP away/
PP- /yelling/ UPDATE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 19, 2003 15:50 CDT
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Ah, Bakura's departure... the notes were a nice touch. It was a surprise to see Marik's thoughts at the end of Ch.11, I had thought the story was ending... ^-^;; but it's nice to see a new twist added in. Ooo, maybe Ryou will use the candle message. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, how do u do it? u update so fast! and ur writting is as good as ever. hmmm, poor ryou... |
Reviewed By: Poison Elf On: April 18, 2003 20:00 CDT
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Poor Ryou, what will happen to him? plz dont let Marik hurt him, and if he does, let Yami walk in on it, so he will be killed and Yugi will be able to go back to Jou, and Ryou will be able to go back to Yami, maybe Malik will be able to go to Honda, or go with Bakura... and Ryou will be happy |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im back! great fic, i absolutly love bakuras role so far in this fic. its in character! so cool! mariks role is kool too. malik loveing honda is weird, but i just lvoe this fic so who cares. cant wait to see the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 08:28 CDT
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ur spelling is tons better! But continue quickly before i die a horrible death from good story deprivision. ^_^ time for me to leave quietly. ((((^_^) |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 13, 2003 13:39 CDT
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Ack, Bakura! I didn't see Marik grabbing him coming at all. Oh, I wonder what will happen because of that... |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 13:44 CDT
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DON'T have Bakura raped and then fall in love with Marik.... That will never happen and is wicked cheesy. "Hmm, you just hurt me physically and emotionally and I've never seen you before but I LOVE you now!" I really love what you have so far, though. Yami has a slightly strange mind for thinking that Ryou was involved romantically with his brother. Your spelling is much better. ^_____^ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 08:48 CDT
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SAWEET!!!! This is so eveil----continue! I command you to continue!! |
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