| "Welcome To Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 08:15 CST
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PP- Upate!!
YPP- Yeah!!
PP-? You were reading it?
YPP- O.OU nooo...
PP- ^_^ Yeah you were!!! O well, you have to update soon!! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 09:15 CST
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PP- /evil grin/ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 17:19 CST
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The city!!! Yay! How will Bakura react to seeing Ryou with Yami?! I wanna know!!! |
Reviewed By: Ayumu! On: March 11, 2003 19:16 CST
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That was lemony fresh! Lol. Good chappy. What do Oyasumi and Ousama mean? o_O; No idea there. ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 19:06 CST
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what does Ousama and Oyasumi mean? good lemon too! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 09:00 CST
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PP-^_^ Neato!!! I like it, I like it a lot!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is really turning out well. It seemed a little cliche at first, but you are keeping it interesting with the twists of the secondary relationships. It would be cool if you developed those a little more.
I look foward to your next update! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 09:54 CST
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I haven't even got as far as the second paragraph when some thing is bothering me. Ur Bizarre is acually spelled Bazaar. Ok I'll finish the chappie and complaine then. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if theres one thing i really like about this fic, its that yami is wonderfully in character. more than most fics of him either being mean to his fic (cuz the real yami wouldnt do that i think) so keep it up^^. |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: March 04, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! Write more! Man! I had to stay after school to redo tests. So did a lot of other people! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update fast |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: March 02, 2003 20:16 CST
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Aw, now I remember why I liked fluff. ^_^; So cute. *huggles Yami and Ryou* *chants* Chapter 5 pwease! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: March 02, 2003 14:13 CST
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Ah, interesting so far. I hope Yami stays as nice to Ryou as you've portrayed him so far. I can't wait to see what you do with this story. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ yes i definetly like this one beta the 'father, mother, lover' n i really like how this fic is going so far. looks like yamis gonna be nice to him. kool. ne wayz, keep on goin i really like this ficcy. |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: March 01, 2003 21:04 CST
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Hi! I'm back, I had the flu. Weewoo, I love your new ficcy! ^_^ It's like an au to Pharaoh's Gift. More please! Lata'. |
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