| "Welcome To Slavery" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnubisAngel On: August 14, 2003 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooooooh *creepy music playz* DUN DUN DUNNNNN! what a cliffhanger! cool stuff man! although i must agree with 'the math equation genius'on 1 point: marik IS a sick perve! not because he's attracted to men, but because he rapes people! i mean ya, its ok if they feel 4 eachother but thats just wrong... very interessting fic! good job! keep writing!!! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: the math equation genius On: August 14, 2003 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
malik = so cool
marik = sick perve
yami = baka
ryou = cute but rather dumb
yami + ryou = the wrost couple in anime history
marik + bakura = dont_even_get_me_started_on_it_!
bakura = this fic = DA BOMB!
this is soooooo interesting plz continue |
Reviewed By: -SurprizeD-StarE- On: August 14, 2003 09:16 CDT
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S-S: *in his sing-song voice* if ryou'd only have a brain he'd choose his brother, if albino-man only had a brain he'd chose his bro... ha ha tomb-robber rulz, pharaoh droolz... |
Reviewed By: ................................................. On: August 14, 2003 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
go malik! uhu! go malik! o ya! go malik! he rules! go malik! cuz he aint a wimp! go malik! uhu! go malik! cuz he actually haz a mind of hiz own! go malik! uhu! go malik! he hates kaiba! go malik! he rocks! go malik! O YA! gimme a D, an I, an E, a Y, an A, an M, an I! wat doz that spel? DIE YAMI!!! uhu! cuz he did things to poor-brainless-no-longer-so-innocent-ryou! O YA! |
Reviewed By: lunarsfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 00:37 CDT
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wow this was a great story. the ending was a good touch. |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 18:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Go for the Sequal! YEAH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^____________________________________________^! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 12:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your stuff!!! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sputters* a... isis/bakura pairing?! hmph.
well, im glad that ryous safe... i assume then that theres still more left? ur a great fic writter.. though u update much less often then u used to. do the isisxbakura thingy, i wanna see a lemon where bakuras straight.
chara |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, do an isis x bakura pairing. that is new...not too many of them around. |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very Very, good story so far. Write more chappies!^_^! You have a knack for writings. Keep going for it! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 12:11 CDT
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I fianally get to a computer and I get a pleasant surprise---updates on one of my favorite stories!!! Keep up the good work and I'll check back soon.
PP ^_^ & YPP -_-U |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: June 15, 2003 14:35 CDT
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Well... that's only evil if the obvious isn't going to happen. ^-^;; Is a happy ending right around the corner? |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 16:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
finally! keep goin! |
Reviewed By: WingZero Gal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! THAT WAS GOOD!!!!, sorry i dont review till i get to the last chapter cuz its just the way i am, man it took me awhile to get her cuz i kept on getting interupted, anyway i loved this story hurry up and write the next chapters soon ok i'm looking forword to it, bye bye now off to read another story |
Reviewed By: KittyKat On: May 28, 2003 11:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kat: WTF IS UR PROBLEM?????? HOW COULD U DO THAT TO RYOU????? OMG! UR SO MEAN! plz, im beggining u, jusy make sure that Jou and Yugi return the next chapter u write, and make sure u get Bakura and Yami to save him...... maybe get Bakura a lover (not Ryou *sudders*) and lets see some Lemony goodness plz!
Rose: My Hikari is overdramitic about ficys with Ryou being happy one moment and in pain and sorrowful the next
Both: Ja (plz use some of my ideas!) |
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