| "Frozen Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 12:10 CST
Comment/Review:
This is intersting so far. I hope you post more soon! I want to see Yami's and Seto's reactions when they meet their counterparts. When are Bakura and Marik going to show up? Please post soon?!! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 11:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I know lots of people do it, but PLEASE, no author's intrusions (aka "author's notes") inside the actual story. It RUINS the mood, any dramatic tension or suspense you may have going, etc. |
Reviewed By: Black Diamond On: April 02, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going! This is really good! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! Poor poor Yugi! (demetri from Land Before Time. > |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! Poor poor Yugi! (demetri from Land Before Time. > |
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