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Title: The Creed Arc
Reviewed By: Alexandra06 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hated it and loved it hated it then loved it again. Geeeez Duo hurt so bad and you wanted to fix everything but there was nothing you could do and it sucked! I love your story...I hope it hasn't ended with Justice Boy completely helpless not now that Duo finally understands. That's just plain cruel, even if you did put in there that he would wake up I wanna see it happen.
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an amazing ability to draw a person into a character and make that character completely believable. This is by far the best what-goes-behind-Duo's-eyes fics I have ever read. It opened up my eyes and made my jaw drop. It made me want to cry, scream, and generally run a gambit of other emotions, which is truly hard to do. I will never be able to look at Duo the same way again! Even the ending was a nice twist, not entirely happy, but not angst ridden either. Mad props to you! You are a genius. Much like Duo.
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: May 12, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! first time ever i seen soo many updates... *headspins with excitement* well my head doesn't actually spin. I can wait to read the latest chapters! Keep up the good work!! I'd beee back 'lil while with real comments *looks at huge stack of papers for exam* DARN it why doesn't coffee work for me!!
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 00:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh*...lol It ended well, though the first few chapters took some wading through to make total sense. ^^ And oh, Aladdin! lol! Baggie pants...hmm.. ^_^ But yeah...now I'm going to go read the sequel! yipee! O.o
^The Firefaery^ |
Reviewed By: Faen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is one of the only fics that has ever made me cry. You have such a way with words, and I am happy that I discovered this story. I can't wait to read your other fics. This story was so full of sorrow, and I needed a tissue at the end. Thank you so much for writing this fic, I have been truly blessed to have read it. |
Reviewed By: Sniffles (She who does not exist) On: April 05, 2003 00:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anything marked 9 was marked nine not because of any flaws, but mostly because there is -always- room for improvement. No one is ever perfect.
The theme was one I've seen in many GW fanfics, however, you handled it well. And that is rare for this theme.
I liked this particular fic for it's warmth. It pulled me in from the start and made me believe everything Duo was feeling was real. You belived in the characters, in the story you were telling, and as a result I ended up believing in it as well.
It had a lovely, flowing quality, except in chapter changes. Sometimes they were a bit abrupt, or unfocused, but that wasn't a huge problem.
All in all this was a nicely written fic, that was well worth my non-existant time.
Now I shall retire.
Adios Amiga.
-Sniffles |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 07:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that was the most well written,in depth character development, and the greatest fic I have read in ages. I guess to say it cool like damn that was good lol. When I read your fic at first I was like oh no a typical angst but somehow you showed a side of Duo that made me want to hug him and cry. I liked seeing into what he thought and felt. And how the people he cared about still loved and wanted to help him no matter what. 100% excellent! First time I have actually wrote something like this hehe aw well can't wait to read more of your work! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yea! A happy ending. |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 00:00 CST
Comment/Review:
it's like cadbury's chocolates: dark and sweet
post more |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh so much pain in Duo, can Fei and Heero heal him? Please say yes. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is going to be a 1x2x5 fic right? Duo's constant self pity is getting a little annoying though. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Katalina On: March 27, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this really gave me the chills...but it touched me none the less. I wonder what Heero will think of Duo now that he got rid of his mask. |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. So detailed and - what can I say- I was captured and held to the end. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. Still really surreal though. |
Reviewed By: fanny On: March 15, 2003 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o' my God!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is wonderful!!!!!!! i absoutly love it!!!! In the begining it was kida hard to follow *mumble mumble-like psionic saga-mumble mumble* but now that you're really into it, its soooooo cool!!! Its so wonderful how you describe how Duo makes his mask, and how both Heero and ufei want to help him. And its so sad how the real Duo feels. but, will this story end up a 1+2 or a 5+2??? tell!!! |
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