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Title: really cool - love it!
Reviewed By: charityvm On: March 02, 2005 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I am so glad I read your story. I love the way that you put Tohru in the middle of all this attention, and that everyone really likes(loves? ;-) ) her. Anyway, I saw the comment about not liking the Akito bit of the story ... I for one REALLY enjoyed it! I also really like the fact that Tohru does remain so innocent ... because I think this is what she is. Innocent :-) If you find some more time to complete the story: great! In any case, I think you should just write whatever you feel like, I am sure this will be the best :-)
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Title: Oro
Reviewed By: ayumikoshiro [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVEEEEEE this Fan Fic. I can't wait for the next part. thank yoy thank you thank you for writing this. I am so ready for the next chapter i can't wait.
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Reviewed By: Vivi-chan On: February 07, 2005 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Would you please update? I saw it had been a while since you put the last chapter! So please don't let it unfinished it would be a pity.
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: omish nezumi On: June 14, 2004 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
i know how it is its Akito right , right... well i know im right im always right hahahahahahahhahaha
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: omish nezumi On: June 14, 2004 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
i know how it is its Akito right , right... well i know im right im always right hahahahahahahhahaha
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Title: PLEAZE!!
Reviewed By: I ride a hippie van!! On: May 08, 2004 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON< UPDATE SOON. GODS DAMN IT I FORCE YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY YOU HUMAN!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Felln2aFantasy16@aol.com On: June 08, 2003 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, well i loved this fan fic since i started reading it! it was so wonderful. but ever since Akito and Touhru are together it ruins the whole story about the mistury guy! i know who it is and stuff and i think its a wonderful idea that its that person but this is STUPID! I mean come on! this story is about touhru and the mistury guy!this person is thowing it off corse! so if i were you i would read it up to chapter 5 or 6 and stop cus thats when it starts to get stupid. so its good at the begining and gets bad at the end, so far. and then she says she might just end it with Akito and Touhru! thats stupid, she should finish what she started with the mistury guy. and it was addictive too and now im just like yea more stuff about akito and touhru, blah. |
Reviewed By: Jewell On: May 29, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best I've ever seen! Please keep on going! It's a truly wonderful story! |
Reviewed By: Vic On: April 04, 2003 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is the mystery guy Haru?Seems to me that it is .... Anyway ,continue on please !! |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Wonderful and mysterious. |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: March 15, 2003 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why u end there!??! its jus getting better ...aww...*whines* why!? why?! and then now.....WHO can that "mysterious" guy be ...hmmm *ponder* oh well plz continue soon!! more plz!!!^____^
~bunny~ |
Reviewed By: Tasuki's Gurl On: March 14, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more, now!!!!!!!! J/K, but please do write some more, and hurry! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yxonomei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 16:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Write more this is addictive! |
Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very interresting story! Please write lots more in the future! It was detailed, and had the character thoughts just right.... well, for how they act. ^^; But I'm also curious....
WHO IS THIS MYSTERY GUY?! ^^
Guess I'll just have ta wait! But please bring it out soon! It's also a very kawaii story! I forgot to mention that! But it is! Anyway.... please write more! ^^
Faye-Faye =3 |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: March 02, 2003 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ugh! who is this soma guy!!??*sits down and ponders cutly* hmmmm....could it be haru-chan? or hatori-san?no no ....grrr wait...could it be ayame-chan!!?? he has prety eyes uuhh....i dont know!! write more soon please i wanna know what happens!!!*puppy eyes* please!! good luck
~bunny~ |
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