| "Stay with me!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: akasuki088 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 23:56 CST
Comment/Review:
i want updates!!!!more and more chappies!!! i want updates!!!UPDATES!!!!
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Reviewed By: animehfreak099 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's sooo good. but i am soo sad about the grammar since I am a good english student. the story is soo good that i envy you. just improve our grammar and spelling and the stor will be good too. I wish you write another chapter too.
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 23, 2004 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 11, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story love everything about it so plz plz plz plz plz update as soon as u can and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Emilyfreak On: June 30, 2004 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You so have to update this story! And soon or we will all die! Syaoran and Sakura are so cute together
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: minna On: June 18, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH! THIS IS SOO EXCELLENT! PLEASE I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE! OHH I JUST LOVE LI AND SAKURA! SO DAMN CUTE...AIN'T SHE A LUCKY GIRL NEH? HEHE
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Title: nightingail of the forest
Reviewed By: pin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Reviewed By: insanecherry/& hot shot On: January 30, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
insanecherry:i just luv ur story u gotta finish it plz with sugar and cherry on the top... hot shot: who would put sugar on top of ice scream? insanecherry: i do hot shot: that explain everything now. insanecherry: and wat that suppose 2 mean? hot shot:nothing, okay this is what i think about your fanfic. i think your fanfic great and i hope you would finish it. i would willing wait for the next chapter and... what that sound?*turn around to see a sleeping cherry*he,he,* this is agoing to be fun*went into a room to get one of those party popers* oh cherry wake up*stert to pull the poper end and BANG* insanecherry:haaaaaaa...*jumping out of the chair* wat the heck was tat? hot shot: *he,he hiding the poper* oh it was nothing. cherry you were sleeping again. insanecherry:well sorrrrrrrrry,but some of us have homework to do. hot shot: you're joking right, it's the endind of the semester and your teachers gave you homework! insanecherry:heck ya i have a report on egpyt to do , a math homework * pouting silently*, paractice for the a performence, and read a 624 page book and rit about what it's suppose to mean! * taking a long deep breathe after finishing* hot shot: then you better get started. insanecherry: do i have 2 *pouting sadly at hot shot* hot shot: yes, now scoot *shooing cherry to her bachpack* insanecherry: fine, but if i have 2 suffer u have 2 suffer 2. * picking up the phone and dailing a phone#* hello is Goun there, if she is can u tell her that her boyfriend was flirting with a blonde. thanks. hot shot: what! i wasn't flirting with anybody! insanecherry: i know *smiling evilly* hot shot: and she not my girlfriend! and also wat blonde! *wavimg his arm rapidly in the air* insanecherry: now hot shot how can u say such a thing. if she heard tat u'll be dead and i bet at least once in ur life u flirted with a blonde. hot shot: why would she i care if she not my girlfriend and i'm not a player who flirt with every girl. insanecherry:ha, *pointing index finger at hot shot head* so u hav been flirting and i didn't say every girl and also i didn't call u a player, but maybe i should. hot shot: you're insane! insanecherry: whatever, talk 2 the hand cause the face don't want 2 hear it. *put ing her hand infront of hot shot face* hot shot: you're immpossible! * swing his hand in the air! insanecherry: whatever* waving good-bye and slamming the door on the why out* hot shot: oh man, now i'm dead her friends are going to kill me, but worst of all she probably going give me the silent treatment. i can't stand the silent treament from her. i got to go hand ask forgiveness *whispering to himself] even though it not my fualt* bye and t2l and update * slamming the door to chase after cherry.
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Reviewed By: nightingail of the forest On: January 23, 2004 17:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty awsome! but please check your spelling. keep it up
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Reviewed By: Kari_018 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi you should post the nex chapter soon or I'll torture everyones fave guy syaoran like this *ties him up and eats chocolate in front of him slowly* and like this *has kero eat chocolate too* but your story is none like I read before oh yeah post the chapter or else something will happen to our beloved syaoran *evil glint in the eye* see ya
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Reviewed By: tokyo rose On: July 13, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
its not bad, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. otherwise its an excellent story and i can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: kawaii-syaoran-Sakura On: June 10, 2003 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
love it! plz update!! and, i never new this is a fanfiction website!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: SakuraSyaoran4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is very original and not like those other fics out there. Keep up the good work and please, even though I know it's kind of hard, try to make the chapters longer.
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Reviewed By: EmpressMinet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
ok this is actually Moon_Kitsune but i am at EmpressMinet's house. Go me! Anyway, I think this was really good! U should continue! |
Reviewed By: litlleniegenie On: March 14, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think its interesting the way you had Sakura and Li meet. ive always liked them as a couple cause they seem so perfect for each other. write more please!! |
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