| "The Perfect Birthday Present" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 21:07 CDT
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i luved it and all but i have a question as well...why did sesshomaru give kagome the neclece if he only ment her bad will? and why did u let sess talk at the end? lol he would be better off mute but see everything and hear everything don't you think? lol well anyway good story and i like the ending idea! =]
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Title: Review for The Perfect Birthday Present
Reviewed By: The Eternal Hyper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. This story was great. I'm going to go read the sequel, Wishes Made and Dreams Come True, right now! You did a great job with this, and I'm sure your other stories will be awesome, too!
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Title: the perfect birthday present
Reviewed By: cute but psycho girl On: April 13, 2005 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was totally awsome how you ended it. i never expected that. that is like the best betrayal sp? story i've ever read. :) :) :) :)
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Reviewed By: sesshuo On: March 05, 2005 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i htought the style of writing was good. the spelling was great though not perfect.the creativity was really good. i have also read a lot of fanfics and have even thought of writing one without a happy ending because in life it never turns out happy like in the movies and books. the enjoyment i found in in was alright. thanks for writing this fanfic. and i am sure that your other readers agree and if not they just dont understand.
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Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 19:20 CDT
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hi great fic its on my favs i hope i read more of your fics seeya bye
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Title: im' lazy but good job!
Reviewed By: j3ndls [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 20:43 CST
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aww (10 for all of the catagories, to lazy) thats a cute chappie, sessy likes her AWWWW....must keep reading good job!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story its has heart touching romance, drama,ect. i just love it...... well i wish you luck on any of ether or new stories..good-bye
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 05:49 CDT
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Great Story! A Fan and Author, Starry Dragon Knights
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
what. the. HELL! how could he betray her like that? i thought he loved her?! and what did that note say? you have got a messed up style of writting. when the summary says sess/kag, i expect them to live happily ever after. you shoud not have put sess/kag on the summary. it is very misleading to what the story is really about and like. but other than the ending, pretty good story.^_^
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Title: WHAT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh i hope u post the sequal soon!!!!! but please make it a s/k pairing please!!!!!!!!! and what did the note say!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally loved it!!! Just to let u know I go by the name ennovymoon as well!! Sorry I didn't review sooner by stupid reminder hadn't told me that u had updated in a while! Anyways I loved it and I am especially loved the surprise ending!! |
Reviewed By: xxnoirnekoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just have one question though, what did the letter say? was it just his way of taunting her, or was there some deep pain, or pride that forced him to betray her? lol i read way too much into things. great fic!
jamie
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