| "Rest, Relaxation, and Realization" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 16:49 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a good lemon |
Reviewed By: Midnight Star [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best Inuyasha lemons that I've read! You did a very good job for someone that hasn't done it before. You should do another lemon a Sess and an adult Rin one. |
Reviewed By: Mio On: March 22, 2003 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good! You should diffantly do more |
Reviewed By: mishisama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kwaii! that was sooo romantic! ^^ I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Descent_Into_Insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it, and would greatly enjoy any other fanfic such as this, with delicious lemony content. ^__^ Great job! |
Reviewed By: squinky On: March 07, 2003 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just so perfect!!! (for lack of a better word) You've obviously put a heap of effort into this and its turned out so well!!! I love it and I really wish there was more!!! |
Reviewed By: aya2003 On: March 06, 2003 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, please keep doing a good job.
have you ever thought of doing a muriko and sanga fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
PS, this has a full-blown continuation oportunity! |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! that was poetic. Add more onto this! it's good writing! I like! |
Reviewed By: Sayuri On: March 06, 2003 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it. ^___^; Please please please continue. This is probably one of the better ones I have ever read, but I am also a sucker for an Inu Yasha/Kagome pairing. ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Katrina Marie On: March 06, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, wonderful :). I enjoyed it very much, that's all. I love how you focused on mainly what InuYasha was feeling at the time. It was great, I feel all WAFFY :) |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk On: March 06, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it. Your hard work showed in this story. You should write more stories like this. |
Reviewed By: inulover On: March 06, 2003 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this lemon you should countinue this and make it a full story insted of a one-shot if you spent so much time on it |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: March 06, 2003 12:28 CST
Comment/Review:
a VERY gratifiying lemon! nice job. i only have one complaint: it is NOT 'iron reaver soul stealer'. obviously you've been watching that sorry excuse for an english dub that they've been showing. 'SANKON TESSUO' means 'SOUL SHATTERING IRON CLAW'. you may want to go to kazaa, download it, and then download all the subtitled Inu Yasha's.
i'm sorry. this is just my pet peeve. I hate how the english dub changed certain things to make themselves happy instead of saying things the way their supposed to be said.
anyway, i'm off on a tangent. i think you did a great job of writing. i really like seeing the different ways that IY and K 'get together' for the first time. I really be interested in seeing you take a swing at a full fic instead of a one shot. I'll be sure to review. |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was a great lemon! your grammar is really good and the plot is fairly original.
Keep writing like that!! |
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