| "Rest, Relaxation, and Realization" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: Katrina Marie On: March 06, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, wonderful :). I enjoyed it very much, that's all. I love how you focused on mainly what InuYasha was feeling at the time. It was great, I feel all WAFFY :) |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk On: March 06, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it. Your hard work showed in this story. You should write more stories like this. |
Reviewed By: inulover On: March 06, 2003 14:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this lemon you should countinue this and make it a full story insted of a one-shot if you spent so much time on it |
Reviewed By: saiyankiyse On: March 06, 2003 12:28 CST
Comment/Review:
a VERY gratifiying lemon! nice job. i only have one complaint: it is NOT 'iron reaver soul stealer'. obviously you've been watching that sorry excuse for an english dub that they've been showing. 'SANKON TESSUO' means 'SOUL SHATTERING IRON CLAW'. you may want to go to kazaa, download it, and then download all the subtitled Inu Yasha's.
i'm sorry. this is just my pet peeve. I hate how the english dub changed certain things to make themselves happy instead of saying things the way their supposed to be said.
anyway, i'm off on a tangent. i think you did a great job of writing. i really like seeing the different ways that IY and K 'get together' for the first time. I really be interested in seeing you take a swing at a full fic instead of a one shot. I'll be sure to review. |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was a great lemon! your grammar is really good and the plot is fairly original.
Keep writing like that!! |
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic. I hope that you write more Inuyasha fic's like this. |
Reviewed By: baki-chan On: March 06, 2003 06:23 CST
Comment/Review:
nice, nice nice...a little been there, done that kinda story, yet so sweet...nice read. |
Reviewed By: Rinaanne45 On: March 06, 2003 04:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did great for you're first try. You should keep writing, can't wait for more Inu Yasha ^-^ |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 05, 2003 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic of your is beautiful. You do have some talent there. The lemon detailing was AWSOME. Keep up the good work.
Catch ya on the flip-side
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: loved it! On: March 05, 2003 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I'm dying to see what else you have prepared for us...that was a really good lemon, even if the plot wasn't the most original thing in the world. Really really enjoyed it and hope you will write more soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dick On: March 05, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its ok, not the most original plot, but its well written. |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool man, that was great |
Reviewed By: Muzi Suki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
This story was awesome!!!! You definetly need to write more stories!!!! Keep up the great work!!! |
Reviewed By: musechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought it was really sweet, sweet enough to make delicious lemonade. ;9 lol. " Everybody raise your hand if you like lemonade." Seriously, I did enjoy this fic and it wasn't like those mindless freak-capades ( that is a substitute word.) I've read and just well.... AAAAggggh! nasty, just like Castor-Oil. LoL. |
Reviewed By: KiiKii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooooh! This was totally choc-full of syrupy-sweet lemony goodness!!! This was fanfic was done in a really tasteful manner! I give total props to you on this one Hisaki! Smile!!! I'm sure this is the first of many great ones to come!!!
~(\/)~
KiiKii ( |
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