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Title: D
Reviewed By: D On: January 26, 2004 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic, I can't believe how mean Yami was in this fic, the lemon seemed kinda heartless but that was a good effect. NIce work.
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Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic, I can't believe how mean Yami was in this fic, the lemon seemed kinda heartless but that was a good effect. NIce work.
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Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic overall. There's just one tiny little thing... YOU KILLED OFF TEA YOU SON OF A BITCH!!! I don't care ewhat she did, she could've fucked Seto, Mokuba, Joey, Tristian, Marik, Adn Bakuras for all I care, she didn't deserve to die. And Yami's such an asshole, I could never forgive him for what he did. I would have made it my life's goal to see him burn on a cross after what he did. (I also don't think Yami could kill anyone in reality, let alone Tea). Other than that, nice fic, keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 05, 2003 20:02 CST
Comment/Review:
kawaii^^ YxY is the best Yaoi pairing anyone could ask for... except MarikxBakura.... but that's beside the point... keep up the good work^^
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Reviewed By: savara On: November 02, 2003 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Savara:you evil! Me love fic! Must I say more? Raven:Too bad she ain't saying any more. Rena:Raven ain't isn't a word. Raven:Back off or I'll kill ya! Savara:*faints*
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Reviewed By: savara On: November 02, 2003 10:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Savara:Yeee hhhaaaaaaaaaaaa! SAVARA MUST READ MORE!
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sAVARA:
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sAVARA:
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sAVARA:
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Savara: Me wanna read so I won't even let Rena and Raven out. I said I'd review so I will!
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
savara:You sure do love cliffhangers. Raven:And so do I. Rena:Not that kind of cliffhangers dumbass! Savara: Gotta go because who wants to watch these two fight.*wispers* I'm betting on Raven....
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rena:Savara is reviewing every chapter. Raven: Oh joy. Savara: Glad meza don't have to wait to find out who's at Yami's door. Raven: If I could Savara would be dead by now. Rena: Oh yeah, we're her split persanaltes. RAVEN:And Rena can't spell. Savara: They aren't really my personalities. Raven: THEN WHY CAN WE TYPE IDIOT!? Rena:Don't ask her such hard questions! Savara: I wanna read! BYE BYE NOW!
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Reviewed By: Savara On: November 02, 2003 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Savara: The tree of the dead reminds me of something..... Raven:I have no idea what goes on in your head Savara. Rena: Come on! The sword! The no headedness! My favorite movie! Savara: Oh yeah! It reminds me of Sleepy Hollow! All I have to say is write on my friend. Raven: Anyone who writes good fanfiction is in her mind, her friend. Rena:I STILL LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 18:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Hurry up and update. I like this fic alot, cool idea!
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