| "The Fall of Icarus" Reviews/Comments [ 346 ] |
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Reviewed By: kely On: March 12, 2003 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just go with the whole he gets the ring bck thing and that he doesn't go willing and how are you typing so fast. |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl On: March 12, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I think Ryou should be swtiched to Yugi's and Yami's to avoid his father all togehter.
This is a really good story so far. And when are you going to bring Bakura back???????? |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 18:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, whoopsie! Labout the question, adoption is better. The hikaris getting pregnant tends to freak me out...Yeah! Ryou and Bakura could adopt Anzu! LOL!!! |
Reviewed By: Beholder_of_the_Shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beholder: HeHe, you canoot escape me! What on ff.net? I teied to see your story but it said it didn't exist?! Maybe my bookmark is wrong. oh well. I'm lazy so i'' just see it here, plus I can see the lemons here anyway!
Update soon! God my head hurts! I have a cursed cold and its killing me!! WAHH!!!!
Bakura: oh please! That is nothing!
Yami: And you would know?!
Seto: Ya, you don't get sick!
Bakura: Uh, wasn't I sick just a little while ago?
Yami and Seto: OH YAA!!!
Bakura: Your thinking about someone else.
Beholder: The evil phone ringing! Shut it up!
*Beholder's "Evil" brother enters room, along with his twin brother!*
Brother #1: Haha!
Brother #2: You suck!
Beholder: Leave me alone! Its bad enough I have two little twin brothers that drive me nuts most of the time!
Bakura: Hehe...
Yami:*eyes brothers* I've wanted to meet you guys for a while now, hehe...
Seto: ...hehehehe, As have I.*cracks knucles*
Brothers: AAAHHHHHHHH!!!!*runs from room*
Beholder: Thank good god above and my lovely Yu-Gi-Oh Character here!
Bakura: Geez! How stuffed up are you?!
Beholder: my head feels funny!
Bakura: What?!
Beholder: It feels like a balloon (and I ant kidding about that part, my poor head!)
Bakura: and your reading?! and reviewing?!?!
Beholder: I like this fic to much! Leave me alo....*passes out*
Bakura: Yay! the cold pills kicked in!
Yami: She took cold pills? Shouldn't that just help her feel better?
Bakura: Not if I gave her the night time ones. And two of them extra strength! Hehe!
Seto: Great. What the?! How the hesk is she still typing?!
Bakura: you know her. Yu-Gi-Oh and computers on the brain no matter what going on or what she is doing. *sighs*
Yami: WEll... Upadate soon. And don't make Ryou go with his father.
Bakura: or make him go with his father so I can take over Anzu *shudder* and kicks Stevens A$$!
Seto: Or leave him with me so I can kick his A$$!
Yami: I wanna do it!
Duke: well, this is going no where so See ya next chap! And if ryou does go with his dad, thats will make this interesting. Either way! We all like both! Pick one and We will still be happy!
See ya! |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yamis Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chappie! Poor Ryou. *hugs him* He doesn't deserve to be treated like this. At least the ring was found...by Anzu... Anyway, for the poll, I pick the 3rd option! ^_^ can;t wait for the next chappie! |
Reviewed By: Yui [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 22:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Static
^^^Begind transmission^^^
Yui: Hi Bakurasgirl! I made the switch here successfully! No more of my works are posted on FF.net except a notcie telling people to cme here if they want to find me. This is my declaration of support to you and all other writers who FF.net abuses!
Shimiru (yami yui): Like you?
Yui: *sheepish smile* yeah well, I don't mind them beating up on me, but other people need to be treated with respect!
Shimiru: Mm hmmm... whatever
Yui: Anyways, I aboslutely love this story! I vote for Ryou refusing to go home and anzu brining back the ring! *pumps fist into air, then smiles sheepishly* but that's just me.
Shimiru: *rolls eyes*
Yui oh deal with it, you're gonnna be stuck with me for a long time. Actually , that goes for you too Bakurasgirl! I'm gonna review every chapter writeen from here on out on any of your stories I can find! YAY FIRENDSHIP!
Shimiru: *twitches uncontrollably*
Yui: *kills self* I did not just say that... I did not just sya that....I did not just say that...
^^^End transmission^^^
Static |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 11, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color*pulls hair and screams* Get that rat bastard away from our Ryou! I can't imagine the police forcing Ryou to go home. He is 17, and has been through the ringer. I hope Ryou comes to and points out Cinetti before the cops go. He needs to go down! You've created an excellent villan...
Tigerlily: Yeah, we were discussing ways to torture him. My "hikari" came up with something really twisted and evil... You sure you're not the yami?
I'm sure already! Just because I wanna gut him like a fish with box cutter and hang him with his own intestines, does not make me evil...much. ^_^ Remember, I'm maliciously creative, not evil. I like the idea of Anzu showing up the mob and having Bakura appear out of the ring just in time. *sighs* Like a knight in shining armour. ^_^ Can't wait! It'll probably the only time in her life that anyone is glad to see her. And I'm glad my last review cheered you up. *hands a bag of pixy stix* These will help keep you happy... you'll be bouncing off the walls, but happy! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 11, 2003 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YOUR FIC IS HERE!!! I was sad when it left FF.net. I thought it was gone for good. Anyways! It's awesome as usual and I want to read more and I think that Ryou should go live with Yuugi & Yami that would be cool. ^-^ Okay. Ja ne!
MORE CHAPPY SOON PRETTY PLEASE!^_________^ |
Reviewed By: Anubis On: March 11, 2003 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is wonderful! I love your fic! I think Ryou should switch houses in order to avoid his father for a time period then return willingly to his father. But only if his father accepts him and Bakura.
So far I think Ryou's father should be personly sent to hell or the shadow realm but of course that can never happen so lets hope Steven changes for the better.
Please write more soon! This is a fun fic to read! |
Reviewed By: Digi On: March 11, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Poor woodland creatures...
I vote for the #4! YAY FRIENDSHIP! ^^
Next chappie please! |
Reviewed By: Kobura Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Ryou should stay there so Anzu can be the...heroine(..hey she's like a drug XD). Plus I wanna see a Mob get past Seto's security! Hehe that would be fun to see....okay and I want to see SOMEONE get beat up and maimed by Bakura for hurting Ryou again ^_^ Yay for not letting ff.net beat you and yay for more chapters!!
~Kobura |
Reviewed By: Caro On: March 11, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! i ~still~ love your fic! it's sooooooo good! ^.^ i have to go to bed and it's only 9:30 -_-; it was nice talking to you and i like your web site. good night! *goodnight hug*
Bye! |
Reviewed By: Aesa Bast On: March 11, 2003 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
I say that unless Steven has a major change of heart (the arrogant, homophobic rat bastard), Ryou should not return to his home. If it comes to the worst, Malik can take Ryou back to Egypt with him... maybe on the way to the airport they could get the ring from Anzu. I really like the fic, and Anzu's idiocy in this chapter gave some much needed comic relief. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think they should go to Yami, and Yugi!! |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff On: March 11, 2003 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewd in a while. Nice job with how the fic is going. You will still warn before lemons right? So I can skip those chapters. Poor Ryou he's sick again. I hope Yami Bakura comes back soon. |
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