| "Caught In The Middle" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 11:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, Ryou got a burst of bravery, asking Kaiba if he wanted to join them.
Only a few misspellings that I noticed.
The overnight party could be very interesting indeed. |
Reviewed By: Kitsune On: March 08, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: March 08, 2003 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Good so far. We all know there's going to be some interesting happenings at the sleep over. *winks* Poor Ryou, caught in the middle yet again. XD |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon On: March 08, 2003 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Red Dragon"hey cool ficcy so far its really good and the little matchmaker gig with Yugi was cute and of course the big question who gets Ryou Marik The posseser of the Millenium Rod and is notorious for his old Rare Hunters gang ang has/had two of the God cards and then u have Seto the CEO of famous multibillion organization,has money by the bushel load and can do whatever Ryou wishes plus has three of the BEWD but theres also the personality trait Seto:once mean,arrogant,cold hearted,and willing to do anything to get what he wants and then u have Marik who is either the hikari or the Yami but either way both are nuts well when come up with demented schemes anyways but he can relate to Ryou with the hole Millenium thing but i guess we'll just have to see were the table turns well that all i can say cya and again good stry |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo! bishoujo sadows got anoda ficcy! yay! ooo a sleeeeeeep ova!^^ this should be interesting. |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl (also on mediaminer) On: March 07, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool! Threesomes yay!!!! Bring it on! |
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