| "KOOL-AIDS WRATH!!!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: ...???!!!@@@###$$$ On: June 02, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami-why are we reviewing this fic again?
me-cause i like the fic of it can't believe u forgot...
Yami-at least im 5000 years old
me-so....... im 14!!!
Yami-and whats your reason?? IM PHAROAH!!! MUHAHAHA!!!!!!
me-how can u be pharoah? what if some1 got ur place?
(Marik in pharoah clothes)
(yami starts to reclaim his "throne") |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 04:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Solo_girl:Madness, insanty, and no plot line. This is just what I need before finals.
Malik: Whatever!
Solo_girl: *stars in eyes* MALIK!!!!!!
Malik: UUUUUUUHHHHHHHH......RUN
Solo_girl: Yay, tag; I'm it.*tackles Malik* Of my own variation.
Malik: gulp
Solo_girl: Now that I caught you we eat powdered koolaid. *hands pouch to Malik* Yum.
Malik: I think I'll just take my leave.
Solo_girl: O no you don't. * wraps her arm protectivly around his neck* Your saying right here with me.
Malik: *wimper*
Solo_girl: Either this, or I give you to the fan girls outside. |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 20:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
ARE YOU EVEN GOING TO UPDATE?!I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!WHEN YOU DO UPDATE LEMME KNOW!K?BYE |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sarah:can i talks?
me:no!anyways can i be in the rest of your story?pwease!!!!!!!!ill give you a big bucket of coolaid and pixi stix!!!!!!!!!!!
sarah:no mine!
me:no there for my new favorite author!*takes out mallet*
sarah:*shuts up*-
me:good!bye=^_^= |
Reviewed By: DannyKen23 On: March 20, 2003 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should have the hamhams show up when the antelopes land. have them try to steal their koolaide. but everyone would get mad and have some hamham shishkobob for dinner, and have Hiei step on a few |
Reviewed By: AisuErufu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AisuErufu: AHHHH!!!!!! I know how ye will escapeth thy death trap!
Ryoko: No you don't.
AisuErufu: The squirells will bring up their helicoptor next to the plane DAMN SQUIRELLS and then they will INVADE and take the wheel those DAMN SQUIRELLS!!!! And then they will EAT people and then my army of invisible flying antelopes will come to the rescue! And we will FLAME the DAMN SQUIRELLS and everyone will fly down on an antelope!!!! *BWUAHA* And then we all have a nice little FLAMED SQUIRELL souviner!!!!!
Ryoko: My god you're insane....
AisuErufu: YEAH!!!! *glomps Malik* AND IT'S MALIK! They named him wrong those DAMN DUBBERS!!!! YOU HAVE TO ATTACK THE US DUBBING SYSTEM!!!!!!! *beats the living crud out of dubbers*
Ryoko: I don't want to be your muse anymore.... |
Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover On: March 12, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you can't leave us hanging, I have to admit, this fic is really funny, you only lose a point for killing Tenchi too soon (the enjoyment factor, I would have had "Indiana" Tenchi get eaten by a shark) Well here's what you should do for part 3...the plane crashes in the water and well the crew end up on island inhabited by the hamtaro cast, and are guarding a special treasure, a very rare and very good koolaide! Of course Marik, Bakura and Sesshomaru want it all for themselves...think about the endless possibilities...cheers to a great fic so far! *Drinks "lemon" flavored koolaide* Ahh a sugar high!!! |
Reviewed By: pure drivel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 19:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh,heh. Good idea! |
Reviewed By: DMGirl#1fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like STRAWBERRY ICE CREAM!Squash the spider with an evil sugar high chibi!My story i Yu-Gi-Oh! Meets the Slayers!R&R it! |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:47 CST
Comment/Review:
spiders?i hate spiders ill kill them and burn them and i love CHOCOLATE ICE CREAM!!!!!!!!!!!I WILL PROTECT YOU!!!!!just put me in the story and keep people from tugging my tail pwease?oh im cat demon incase your wondering i love ice cream and malikmwhahahahhahahahahahahahahaha well i gotta go and dwestroy the would bye*takes drink of human blood*its a craving hehehe mwhahahahahaha*coughs* |
Reviewed By: pure drivel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Pure Drivel:ARRRG! HIEI IS MINE! |
Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 09, 2003 06:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Hei only likes short people *hint hint* have some chibi-izing spray... ... my god what have i done... chibis on koolaid induced sugar highs...... lucky people |
Reviewed By: Azriel On: June 16, 2003 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got an idea, make hiei go crazy you know with that xena yell/scream.Have him take sango's boomerang and destroy ryoko,jim,and kagome!The reason he went insane is because I came in from nowhere and called him shorty and halfpint and he's mad and he's sugar-high!You can call me Azriel,Lilshae,or Pyro(it means dangerous wich I am dangerous)!By the way I had cookies,cherry koolaid,and candy for breakfast so I'm a little wild ~__________^ |
Reviewed By: Setoluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is funny.I liked the part where Kuwabara got shoved into the volcano! He's so ugly that he deserves to die. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DannyKen23 On: March 11, 2003 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write more and make the HamHams appear.
Then have Hiei step on them. |
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