| "The Son Rises" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Michiko On: July 07, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Fan Fics I have ever read!!!!! It is so good, I think I could cry. You should post this on Fanfiction.net and you will get a ton more reviews!!!!! Awsome, Awsome work! I can only hope to live up to authors such as yourself. but if you ever go to fanfiction.net, check me out under zoids, my pen-name is Sanity-Stealing-Lawn-Gnome. I bid you the best of luck on your next chapters! I will continue to check up on this story with great interest. I will never be able to exclaim how happy you have made me with this story!!! Love it lots. You are a wonderful author. Great work!!!
Ja'ne
Michiko |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: July 05, 2003 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got caught up and I wanna say that the last 3 chaoters are completely AWESOME!!!!Ravenwings,this is very well-written and it's really holding my attention!!I can't wait to see how the fight turns out!!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: June 12, 2003 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved chapters 11 and 12 Ravenwings!!!!You're doing such a good job at capturing emotions!!!Keep it goin'!!!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: May 27, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still love it!!!I really like how you're getting into Van and Fiona's feelings and how they want to act like mom and dad.Keep it goin'!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: May 15, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it girl!!!The meeting between Van and Bit was well-written!!!I like the way you got into Van's tension about meeting his son for the first time in years!!You're doin' awesome!!!Keep writing!!I anxiously await the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: ShogunZX On: June 26, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When will the next chapter be ready? :) |
Reviewed By: ravenwings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have to say it was a lot of fun working on this sequel. Thanks to those who supported a sequel and pushed me to keep going.
I hope I didn't disappoint the ones that are reading this story. It's hard to create something from shows that have all ready ended! |
Reviewed By: zoid On: April 11, 2003 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, here's a tip put some romance in some of your sequels. Also don't have van & fiona in there 40's or 50's make them 26 or 29. |
Reviewed By: The Recruiter On: April 02, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is just the beginning of me reading your story. But so far it's really good. I know that you have talent. Find someone to draw a couple of pictures so some chapters. I think this would draw the reader deeper into your story. |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: March 26, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better!!I can't wait until the next chapter's up!!Keep going Ravenwings!!YOu're are really good at this!!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: March 19, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ravenwings,yet another awesome chapter!!!This was one of my favorites cause of all the excitement of Bit coming home!!!Keep it going!!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: March 15, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ravenwings!Hey!Love the story so far girl!!!Keep writing!!!!I need to know what happens!!!!You're doing an awesome job!!! |
Reviewed By: joe On: March 09, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue as soon as possible |
Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,my old name was wraithnow it's zoid i like your fanfic keep on writing sequels. |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: August 18, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps loudly*
Fantastic job Ravenwings!!! Loved every minute of it!! You did great at showing character emotion and the ending was awesome!! Ya did a great job girl!! |
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