| "Moonlight Reflection" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 27, 2003 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed it! Please write more. This had nice pacing and plot development. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 26, 2003 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the most heart felt story I have ever read. My eyes were briming with tears. I would have cried, but then I would not have been able to finish reading the story. It was so chalked full of adj, that everything was crystal clear in my mental picture. This added a great deal to the story. I loved it. You need to seriously consider writing another story.
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Reviewed By: caliko On: June 10, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEEDED ThAT! W0w! lol... know i'm feeling nice and waffy.. a fantastic change from my earlier hormonal surges.. ^_^ ARRIGATOU! This was wonderful! |
Reviewed By: Anex On: May 12, 2003 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it it was wonderful and soooo sweet you should write more your wonderful and plus i love inuyasha stories *blush you can e-mail me back at I_love_Inuyasha@go.com |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute story. I just recently got into the whole Inu Yasha thing so I dont know much about the show/manga but even I could understand the feelings between Inu Yasha and Kagome, which is a really rare thing in fanfictions (for someone who doesn't know the anime to understand). Riiiight... That sounded a lot better in my head.
Anywho, like I said it was really cute. The sit bit was hilarious! I swear I was grinning like a fool. My sister thought I had gone nuts, grinning at the computer screan and all. ^-^ Hope you write another fic cause this was really awsome.
- Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Matt On: April 14, 2003 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. I love Angst/Romance Fics. |
Reviewed By: AkaVChan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow is all i can say. I love it. I really do. keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Cutie Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Great idea! Actually, I think InuYasha wasn't THAT far off from his orginal character. ^_^ I like to think he has a weakness for Kagome and his feelings towards her! ^_^ heheh! Anyways, great job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: March 17, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your story was great!! More people should review it. You should really write more fanfics. I love the way you explain things, you don't explain too much or too little. Well I hope to see more fics from you. Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!!! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! that was so cute!
allie |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cosmos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
awwww....that's so kawaii! they were't all that OOc, Kagome was right in character and Inuyasha just realized his feelings. It's a wondeful story! Keep writing! You're doing a great job! |
Reviewed By: Ms. Prongs [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too bad they can't give 20's here..
Bugger. Well..Why the hell isn't anybody else REVIEWING THIS!
Stupid people..
Baka's the lot of them.
This was VERY sweet, I loved it!
The first one shot I've read that wasn't written by my best friend, and let me tell you. You've exceeded ALL standards I've held for One-shot fics, and more.
I do hope to hear more from you, and soon. Because this is amazing..
IF this is what you do as "beginning writer" man...I'd LOVE to read something you do in a few months, or even your next one.
^*^
Ok...
Now.. My general advice for anybody who considers themselves "Beginners"..it's not bad, your writing is too good to critize but I will say this.
um..
In my 7 1/2 years of writing, I've learned to stay true to two rules.
1) Put your heart into your writing. Don't write just to get words on paper and get a point across. That's not the way to get a good story.
2) sticking with the "heart" theme... before you write a story (I learned this in the 3 semesters of Creative Writing class) put yourself in the story...or look through the eyes of the character... (which is why, in my journey to become a published author I write 1st person perspective...) that way, instead of trying to just "make the people see what they're feeling.." you make the readers FEEL what the characters are feeling.
Geh..that sounded so freaking retarded..
Sorry for the babble fest my friend.
Take care and I expect to see more IY fanfics out of you! |
Reviewed By: Sweet Sango [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya, this was GREAT! I loved it a lot. Amazing job. I don't think that they were too OOC at any point. YES you should keep writing Inuyasha fanfiction!!!!!!! I'd love to read more!!! ^-~ Keep up the great work!!! There were only a few past/present mess-ups, but, i could understand it fine!!!! ^-~ I'd love to read anything else you write! E-mail me at
sweet_sango@yahoo.com or anime_kitten24@yahoo.com
~~Sweet Sango~~ |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 10:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was really nice...if only the real manga would end this way but I have a feeling it won't |
Reviewed By: Inume On: March 16, 2003 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the greatest one-shot fic I've ever read! I really think that you should keep writting more fics. Keep up the fantastic work in other fanfics!! |
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