| "Surviving Together: A New Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 17:16 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell I like this!!! Damn iT!! U R GOOOOODDDDD !! I want a encounter with B/V already but I know that is very very far away damn itttt!
But I like ittt!!
UPDATE SOONNNNNNNNN!!
Later! |
Reviewed By: Kat On: March 09, 2003 16:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 16:31 PST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, off to a good start!! When Vegeta was talking about her 'death', I knew it was Trunks.
very cool. update soon. |
Reviewed By: Allie On: March 09, 2003 15:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! I loved the first one and I love seeing that Vegeta and Bulma need each other, underneath it all :-) Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 14:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad! Bulma thinks Vegeta is dead...that was cool how you connected events, Vegeta knowing of Bulma's pain and that she was calling out his name, and Bulma having Trunks. Love it, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I really like how you made Vegeta turn SSJ. I'm on the edge of my seat in anticipation! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:54 PST
Comment/Review:
CLIFLYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!WHY WHY WHYY!! DO U INSIST TO DO THIS TO ME GRRRRRRRR! I WRITE AND I DONT DO CLIFYS .
*Maybe that's why u suck!*
SHUT UP I HATE U!
*U cant Im you I say what u r afraid to say*
PLEASE UPDATE!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Zungda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 06:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhh!That was awesome keep it up! The sooner you finish the sooner I read the sooner you write again (see where I'm going with this?) |
Reviewed By: Bex On: April 06, 2003 07:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH...oh no i dont think i can take another sad ending! hopefully, possibly, optimistically every thing will turn out good *pray* Oh...GREAT STORY :-D! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 06:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Grrr, you and those cliffies! Anyway, great chapter. It's too bad Cooler had to be such a little coward. I would have loved to see him get the shit kicked out of him. Hmm, maybe that's being saved for later. (looks at computer screen hopefully) |
Reviewed By: bEcCa On: March 20, 2003 16:49 PST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! when are vegeta and bulma going to meet????? com on !!!!!!! when are they going to???? hurry up and update!!!! payce outZ~! |
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